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"Split?" Ash bounced back up as if the pain was never there in reaction to Oz's suggestion. She let go of Ancell's shoulder and put both hands on her hips with a tilted head. It took her a while to ponder the idea of splitting up. Eventually she tilted her head to the other side and brought a finger to her lips as if thinking really hard. It didn't take a while for a small sound of question slipped through her teeth.

"Can you two handle yourselves? I mean I can do rounds myself quite quickly..." Ash said sounding like the grown-up she was. Her brows were slightly furrowed and her arms held to her sides like that of a cop or a detective. Her whole aura turned that way though she didn't notice a thing about it. Of course she worried about Oz and Ancell. They quickly became friends of hers. People she can't just allow to get hurt.
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Ancell wasn't sure how he was going to do on his own. but he was pretty good at hiding and evading things. heck, he was okay at running so he figured he'd be safe. but running marathons of distances was something he wasn't capable of doing. all he really wanted to do was find a library or something. a place he could relax in. hell, if it really was safe enough... he'd probably tell Ash and Oz to leave him there for the rest of his life. his memories could wait.

"I think I'll be fine. I mean..... it's not like this place isn't like the city.... is it?" he murmurs the question to himself as he looked around. he scratched the back of his head and shrugged. he looked to Oz.

"I think Ozzy will be safe..." Ancell told Ash
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"Hm. I guess. Oz, you do have some hidden strength. I trust you. Ancell, if you need to, yell." Ash said in a motivated tone. It was more for herself than the other two but it still was aimed at them as well. Even through that trust a limit had to be made. Survival was key rather than just getting things done. Those things could wait. Lives couldn't as much when faced with danger. A sigh escaped the woman's lips.

"We meet here again in one hour. No more than so. When we get back, we go over what we have and hopefully eat. Once we are back we all should look for a place to sleep in here. Tomorrow morning I will train you two in defense. Well, only if you want to." Ash said as if she were a high class officer of some sort. Her demeanor again changed to that of a real adult rather than the young person she usually acted as. It seemed she knew when to calm down at the right moments.

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"Ozzy..." Oz mumbled as ash was talking she rembered this from somewhere something or someone called her that "ozzy.." She said repeating ancells word and then quickly listend to ash "1 hour that's good" we'll all be safe. I'd love to learn how to fight to " oz said to ash who was telling them the plan "don't get to reckless ash if you don't need to fight run or hide" oz said with a serious tone
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(wah, before I reply.... should something interesting happen you two??? :0 we should brainstorm! xDDDDD if not. should they all just find one hidden memory they had? that seems pretty cool too :'DD )
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(Maybe both? After we fight one and barely get out alive we find a memory?)
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(I believe a plot should be made. :DD It could be like [sh. I know this is cliche] a memory sort of manifesting itself to lead them to their one certain memory. Or something like that. I don't know. There could be something barely keeping them alive. I think it should happen over time with clues leading them slowly rather than going in just one go. Make the OC's work together and get closer too.)
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(So a build up to the memory)
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(That's a pretty good idea. the three could work together and get closer. there needs to be character development for everyone =w= )
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(I'll follow your leads :D. )
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(Yeah. Build up and suspense as well as character development with their memories. Also, there could be group development as well. Like what Aki said. :DD)

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I'll follow your leads on the group development stuff great ideas)
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(Thank you. And that sounds like it works.
But wait there's more: I was thinking that one or more of them could start falling apart. Not necessarily crazy but you know. One could be the rock that turns out to be the leader in the end. Slowly the memory could eat some of them up each passing moment that they do not have it.
I believe Ancell should become the leader in the end. I only say this because he is a normal person. I'm pretty sure he knows how it feels to be weak and unprepared for a big event. I feel like he would understand a situation before blindly jumping in as Ash would. Also being normal would also mean he know the normal emotions and can learn how to deal with new ones in others that may come out as extreme. Doesn't make sense but I can't put my reasoning into good words but boom! I just feel like normal people would be better leaders than those who have had harder or extraordinary pasts that affect their personality. Ya know?)
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(I was thinking oz could do that cuz she started hating people so maybe she can fall apart then ancells like "yo we are here")
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(Ash could fall too. She was an abuse kid. Though it doesn't have to be as far as Oz. Maybe just a little. Enough to get her to slip up a few times.)

"Bah! I know when and when not to run! I'm 20 being spoken to like a 12 year old....my poor heart." Ash said dramatically in response to Oz, holding both of her hands to her heart as if being stabbed there. It seemed someone flipped her adult switch again. A grin popped onto the young woman's face as she winked at the two and nodded as if saying she'll be fine.

"Well I'm ready when you are. I'll take whatever area you two don't want. You choose first." Ash proposed with crossed arms.

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