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I've gotten quite a mix of feedback so far, and I'm going to put all of it towards my next video. I plan to speak more enthusiastically and slower, and I want to provide better background video content/editing as well.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tzrXBEWvMEw

All feedback is welcome and accepted, thanks!
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Posted 8/13/14

sylvmatic wrote:

I've gotten quite a mix of feedback so far, and I'm going to put all of it towards my next video. I plan to speak more enthusiastically and slower, and I want to provide better background video content/editing as well.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tzrXBEWvMEw

All feedback is welcome and accepted, thanks!


Constructive Criticism: You should enunciate more. It was a little hard to hear what you were saying. Either that or turn up your volume.
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Posted 8/13/14
everything is fine, i just feel you should be more enthusiastic
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You didn't seem very clear at the start, but it got better as the video went on. Almost like you made this as soon as you got out of bed, and you woke up a little more with each second. I don't mean to come across rude, that's just an example that came to mind.

Like someone above me said, enunciate more. Because you weren't clear to begin with, your voice kinda got drowned out by the opening music. Otherwise it was fine to me, the first clip gave a chuckle and you've introduced me to an anime I've never even heard of, so thank you for that.
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