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What kind of improvements do you think this group needs?
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Posted 9/9/14
more active members and more plot (events,semi-realistic conflicts, weak characters paired with strong , or partners with contradicting beliefs ext)
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@michael: Thanks for the tip! :'D
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Yes. Basically go into each character's background. or what background you have and use their past. for example. if the character was a criminal or did murderous things send bounty hunters or enemy's. maybe the current government ruling the people sees them as an abomination and must be eradicated. or maybe they wronged someone and revenge is coming. basically you can have one overall goal. for example Noir's plans or maybe introduce a new power that the characters have to fight or join. someone taking over the world or controlling the zones.

you can add more zones like maybe a built city in the aftermath of a ruined civilization. like a city that was recently built with the technology that they scavenged from the world and they are using it's military application to takeover or instead use it to basically enslave the people ruling over them for the "greater" good to ensure the world doesn't go through the sin thing again.

and especially a lot of detail about how sin destroyed and ravaged the world if you haven't already.

but yes like have one main event and you can tie in the others into the story. for example if someone is after one of the characters and the group has to try to get someone undetected the person looking can give them away so now they have to try to get past them and the guards so it makes it harder.

just some ideas.

a few other zones you could do is, a vast desert with old ancient tombs hiding some secret.

a city built on water run by pirates and thieves or normal people?

a town that's trying to rebuild but keeps getting attacked.

a black market where you can buy information or hide if you're good enough.

an old church in the middle of a prairie or an old house in the woods.

a town of really nice people who are really cannibals.

just some interesting new places. throw in some hint that there is a treasure there that can grant power or save them from death or something or make them rich or give them power over others something like that.


The general plot like are they a bunch of people who just happen to find themselves in this world or is there a goal. like is there a common enemy for them to fight or maybe that enemy recruits some of them to kill others. just some ideas hope they help
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Posted 9/20/14
@jazen: Wow, thanks :' )
Al of that's so helpful <3

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