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Posted 9/20/14 , edited 12/3/14
For those not familiar, which I am guessing is most of you, Mission Mars is a Sci-fi/Fantasy/Shojo Manga available here on Crunchyroll. It is made using the ComiPo program but isn't crap. Though, I am a little biased. I was recently on hiatus, due to life interference, but I have returned with Chapter 7!

So, if you are looking to read something while you wait for your favorite manga to update feel free to fill your time with Mission Mars. Feedback is also always welcomed.

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Posted 9/24/14
Assuming most of you started from the beginning:

What are your impressions of the characters or setting so far?
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Posted 9/28/14 , edited 9/29/14
Okay, new question then:

Have you read Mission Mars? If so, how far did you get? Do you intend on finishing it? If not, why?
Did you look at it and opt not to read it? If so, why?
Have you not even looked at it? Do you intend to at least see what I am talking about?


(Yes, I'm pimping it. Not just because it's mine but I really do want to know what people think of it.)
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Posted 9/28/14 , edited 9/29/14
Will give it a read tonight
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Posted 9/30/14 , edited 10/1/14
I appreciate that DRHILL. I look forward to hearing your impressions of the story so far.

Anyone else willing to be brave and give it a read?
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Posted 10/6/14
It seems that everyone has a secret in Mission Mars. At this point we know Nori's and Tarou's, sort of. We've gotten a glimpse at the trouble brewing with Aoko and Rina. We know the feelings that Miko is hiding. Now we are getting a glimpse of Shun's painful past. But what about Toki? She is sickeningly sweet, kind and noble. Everyone seems to be falling over themselves for her, in one way or another.

So what do you think lurks behind those pigtails and smiles?
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Posted 10/9/14
Ok I'm going to start by saying that its not bad at all like I thought when I read the first page.
I'm going to say that I really like the plot line and everything (character, etc.) But what I don't like is the color scheme, I feel that the color actually is ruining the manga, I would rather prefer it to be in black and what if you could. Page 10, the bear (I think) looks a bit messed up because of the thing in the front (I don't know if its a fish or a claw).

I all honestness I like the plotline and how you made the manga but I feel that in all honestness that the background is whats ruining it for me. I couldn't really focus on the manga as much as I would like to because the color scheme doesn't match with the characters. Make it black and white and I think it will be a lot better!

Hope to read new chapters! Good luck with the manga.
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Posted 10/9/14 , edited 10/9/14
Thanks for the great feedback, Chairman Yao. I agree, sometimes the colors come off a bit too strong especially the ones that focus on the girls because they all have brightly colored hair. Lately I have been experimenting with dulling some of the backgrounds. I will try some black and white panels and see how it comes out.
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Posted 10/11/14
Chairman_Yao wins for October. Any posts made after this post will be considered for the November code. Thank you!
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Posted 10/16/14
In looking at the character's pasts verse personalities - cliche? non-nonsensical? dead on? What are your thoughts? What do you expect in the future? Who do you want to know more about? Who do I expose too soon?
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Posted 10/19/14

Pretty good plot though. I'm interested to see the direction you are planning on taking it from here. It'd be cool if you could let me know when future chapters come out, I'm not actively always checking the forums and stuff.

Also don't enter me for me the gift pass thing, I don't need them. Just saw thread and figured I'd give it a read.
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Posted 10/21/14
Thanks for the great feedback, Multigrain. I can definitely give you a shout when Chapter 8 releases, which if I get my stuff together should be in time for Halloween or soon after. Hehe, there is so much I want to respond with to your questions but at the same time I don't want to give away too much.
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Posted 11/4/14
Ok so I just finished your latest chapter so I've got some stuff to question right now.....



I'm really starting to like this manga (despite it being a shoujo which is typically the manga that bores me the most since the majority are the same (boy enters in falls in love with girl, girl rejects then regrets and come together almost then boom long lost friend who turns out to be a girl comes in and messes everything -> separate and meet again after few years and fall in love blah blah blah)) now I'm rambling....so yea I like the plot line of this manga but its just small bits and pieces like how Shun is naked and some of the colors just feel awkward like the blood in chapter 4.

Good job though! Hope to read the next chapter
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Posted 11/8/14 , edited 11/8/14
Thanks Chairman_Yao.


I recently went through and updated the older chapters, changing some of the lighting effects, font type and a few other details. Sadly, I didn't get to make as many chances to Chapter 4 as I would have liked. Some time ago my computer had a freeze/crash issue which made me lose all my programs at the time. It was right after I had exported Chapter 4. My files were safe but all my programs had to get wiped and my OS had to be reinstalled. It took me months to get everything back in order and programs re-claimed. There was an issue with my Chapter 4 save file in ComiPo, so I had the exported version but not the original pages. It makes editing those pages a little more challenging.
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Posted 11/10/14
Chairman_Yao wins again.
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