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Posted 10/30/14
As the description says, post some excerpts from your own fiction/fanfiction. Put them in spoilers so that they can be easily read without taking too much space.

As such, post and enjoy.

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Said example is not from an actual work of mine and I made it up on the spot. But it's just an example. Please follow the set rules and only post form your own work. It's less likely for us to be expecting such a great excerpt when you might not even follow up.
Posted 10/30/14
I'm very strict about posting my work because I'm not published yet and I don't want idiots stealing my work.
Soo enjoy this spoiler...
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Posted 10/30/14 , edited 10/30/14
Sure...

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26 / M / In a dumpster wit...
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Posted 10/30/14

IgniteBadIntentions wrote:

I'm very strict about posting my work because I'm not published yet and I don't want idiots stealing my work.
Soo enjoy this spoiler...


It could have easily been a small line of dialogue that was very ambiguous.
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Posted 11/2/14 , edited 11/2/14
hell, why not. something i'm working on, still a very long way to go.



and a second one, on fanfiction.net full metal panic.

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Posted 11/22/14
K. From a Fairy Tail fanfic of mine.

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Posted 11/22/14 , edited 12/4/14
From a short story collection I am working on.

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Posted 12/3/14 , edited 12/4/14
I used to be really self-conscious about what I show, but I'll give you guys a little peak at what my writing is like:



Normally I would be worried about people taking my stuff... but you see... I would like to see someone try and glean the entire plot I am writing from this little tidbit.
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Posted 12/3/14
im rather proud of my abilities as an author so heres a preview of my book in progress Eithernet



I'd love to hear reviews good and bad
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Posted 12/4/14 , edited 12/4/14
It was a stormy night in Foghaven and Matthias sat alone in his study as he usually does, twirling his quill in between his fingers and jotting down scribbles and drawing unusual things that he mustered from his imagination. But tonight felt...different. Something was off and he knew it, however, he wasn't sure what exactly was awry so he ignored the strange feeling and continued jotting away at his notepad. Then a sound caught his attention. Not a loud sound, but a soft puff, as if someone were blowing out a candle. He again tried to ignore the growing feeling of uneasiness building up inside him and continued as before. Not five minutes later he heard the sound again and again tried to tell himself it was nothing. But when he looked down to his notepad, he saw a drawing of a girl blowing a dandelion. Thinking that his mindless scribblings were manifesting themselves into his thoughts eased his mind for a moment before he heard the sound again. Although this time... It felt as if someone was blowing past his head. He looked over his shoulder and then back to his notepad and gasped with fear. The drawing of the girl had been ruined.. As if someone blew on the ink, spreading it across the paper. He stood,sending the notebook to the floor as a distant laughter faded into the fog....
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Posted 12/4/14 , edited 12/4/14

Jollyolsenpai wrote:

It was a stormy night in Foghaven and Matthias sat alone in his study as he usually does, twirling his quill in between his fingers and jotting down scribbles and drawing unusual things that he mustered from his imagination. But tonight felt...different. Something was off and he knew it, however, he wasn't sure what exactly was awry so he ignored the strange feeling and continued jotting away at his notepad. Then a sound caught his attention. Not a loud sound, but a soft puff, as if someone were blowing out a candle. He again tried to ignore the growing feeling of uneasiness building up inside him and continued as before. Not five minutes later he heard the sound again and again tried to tell himself it was nothing. But when he looked down to his notepad, he saw a drawing of a girl blowing a dandelion. Thinking that his mindless scribblings were manifesting themselves into his thoughts eased his mind for a moment before he heard the sound again. Although this time... It felt as if someone was blowing past his head. He looked over his shoulder and then back to his notepad and gasped with fear. The drawing of the girl had been ruined.. As if someone blew on the ink, spreading it across the paper. He stood,sending the notebook to the floor as a distant laughter faded into the fog....


Ooooooh I like it! A good atmosphere you have going there.

Also... nice avatar you have there! ^-^
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Posted 12/4/14

LinovaA wrote:


Jollyolsenpai wrote:

It was a stormy night in Foghaven and Matthias sat alone in his study as he usually does, twirling his quill in between his fingers and jotting down scribbles and drawing unusual things that he mustered from his imagination. But tonight felt...different. Something was off and he knew it, however, he wasn't sure what exactly was awry so he ignored the strange feeling and continued jotting away at his notepad. Then a sound caught his attention. Not a loud sound, but a soft puff, as if someone were blowing out a candle. He again tried to ignore the growing feeling of uneasiness building up inside him and continued as before. Not five minutes later he heard the sound again and again tried to tell himself it was nothing. But when he looked down to his notepad, he saw a drawing of a girl blowing a dandelion. Thinking that his mindless scribblings were manifesting themselves into his thoughts eased his mind for a moment before he heard the sound again. Although this time... It felt as if someone was blowing past his head. He looked over his shoulder and then back to his notepad and gasped with fear. The drawing of the girl had been ruined.. As if someone blew on the ink, spreading it across the paper. He stood,sending the notebook to the floor as a distant laughter faded into the fog....


Ooooooh I like it! A good atmosphere you have going there.

Also... nice avatar you have there! ^-^


Thanks! and thats a nice avatar as well ;D haha
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Posted 12/4/14 , edited 12/4/14
“Road Rockets [or Jackrabbit Run]”
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Yuri Futanari
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Naga Shark


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Posted 12/4/14 , edited 12/4/14
“Matters of Love and Hayate”
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Posted 12/4/14
"Bunny Love"
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Yuri Futanari
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Naga Shark


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