School girl
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Posted 12/14/14 , edited 12/14/14


Here's a drawing I made in my spare time. Let me know what you think of it!

She's not 100% done. I'll add more polish to my artwork later down the line.
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Posted 12/14/14
Looks great! I'd work on facial anatomy,hands,as well as making things proportional.
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Posted 12/14/14
Looks really nice. Come to think of it, I haven't draw a school girl in a while.
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Posted 12/15/14
Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, there are a few things I could have done better, but I do have to mention the fact that this is my first anime drawing, so obviously there were going to be a few imperfections here and there. But for a first try, it certainly ain't half-bad.
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Posted 12/15/14
Not bad at all! Don't worry about proportions that much anime is generally fairly loose. The biggest thing holding this back is the lack of depth which comes in A) the variation of line thickness shading.

All around though great job!
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Posted 12/17/14
Not a bad start!

With practice and dedication, you could be fantastic
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Posted 12/17/14 , edited 12/17/14
for a first, its damn good. you got real tallent.


over all its a great start. the pose is good, very good in fact.
the general length of the limbs are great.
the shading is on the right track.
love the lines in the hair (need more)
mostly its just the porpotions are are off. legs, arms.
the hands are too small, but are drawn right, just too small.

over all, your a great artist. i wish i was as good as you are.

mostly you need to just put in the hard time to make it great.
what ever you do KEEP DRAWING!

the word sucks comes to mind. your so damn close to a great drawing.
its like 10 great episodes, but a rushed ending.
in my worthless opinion.
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