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Thank you. I was originally gonna go with Julius Caesar, but did not know how to make a very detailed and at least semi interesting post. As for the sources I used, I don't know how reliable they are as I used a watchmojo video about top 10 conquerors, wikipedia( it can have some decent info at times xD), Biblegateway, and a site called something like cyrusthegreat.net. I knew some things about Cyrus the Great, but learned a few new things as well...such as the Cyrus Cylinder.
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Lancer

Name: St. Longinus
Home: Jerusalem
Alignment: Neutral Good
Catalyst: The soil of Golgotha

A roman centurion later canonized as a saint by the church. At the start a blind beggar, a wretch in society's eyes. This bred in him a deep resentment, and a need to claw himself up in the world, to prove to all who mocked him he was not destitute that he could do what they did just as well as them, and then surpass them. So he trained himself endlessly and without sleep until he could fight as well as any man with his sight intact, and then true to his word soon none could best him. He achieved the rank of centurion and grew drunk on his own power, when he was posted to attend the crucifixion of Jesus Christ. He pierced the side of the messiah with his spear, and from the wound poured blood and water, and it flowed over his eyes and opened them for the first time. Observing this and hearing Christ's final words, Longinus remarked that truly this man was the son of god. Thereafter Longinus dedicated himself to the teachings of christ selflessly serving those who could not fend for themselves, until he was eventually martyred at Cappadocia.

Stats
Strength: C
Endurance: C
Agility: A
Mana: D
Luck: E
Noble Phantasm: B

Class Skills:
Magic Resistance: C
Battle Continuation: B

Personal Skills:
Soul of a Martyr: B+
Mental protection which negates mental interference. Born of his strong faith as a saint and eventual martyrdom.
Divinity: C
Rank in divinity ode to his canonization by the church. He is not divine himself, but is closely associated with the divine and venerated for his holiness
Instinct: A~C
Allows Loginus to sense favorable outcomes for himself in battle. Developed from years of serving as a centurion in spite of his apparent blindness. At it's highest rank it allows him abilities bordering on precognition and halves any penalties caused by visual or auditory obstruction. Is rank A only under normal circumstances. Use of Miracle of Calvary lowers the rank permanently to C.

Noble Phantasms
Lancea Longini: the Bleeding Spear-Rank B+ (Anti-Unit)
A plain centurion's spear, unremarkable in every way save for the fresh blood on it's tip. With this spear Longinus pierced the body of Christ and drew forth a rush of blood and water. And so every wound dealt with this spear will bleed endlessly, draining their lifeblood. For other servants, this will cause them to lose prana. A light injury will only produce a trickle of loss, but a severe one will rapidly empty a servant's prana stores if unchecked. The bleeding cannot be cured so long as Longinus and the spear exist in the world, but the effect may be offset by obtaining prana from another source.

Miracle of Calvary: The blood of the new and eternal covenant which will be poured out for you and for many-A (Single Unit)
Legends speak of Longinus piercing the side of the Lord, and his blood washing over his eyes and opening them for the first time. The centurion who'd known no kindness, no mercy for all of his life saw it for the first time, nailed to the cross. It was the greatest gift he was ever given, but it may be given again. The miracle falls in tears of the savior's blood which will restore any injury, and cure any ailment. It may only be given once for after that the miracle has left him. Longinus had grown used to fighting without his sight, but using Miracle of Calvary will rob him even of this lowering his instinct skill by two ranks and leaving it good only to defend himself. It is a great sacrifice, but not for one who has true need of the blessing. For to follow Christ is to give of yourself, to help others even at the expense of yourself.

Took a few creative liberties with the background, hope it's not too much.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Saint_Longinus
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Jesus Christ

Summoning tool: Spear of Longinus
Class: Caster
Everything A+ since he is the Son of God, no mortal nor king of heroes can match him with his host of angels

Can heal, can summon, can destroy, resurrect, and knows everything!!!


Why not the Saint Longinus, lancer class.
The spear seals the noble phantasms of others when it pierces them, though, that doesn't necessarily have to be his.
give him instead, stations of the cross, A series of unhealing wounds that will, eventually, result in death.


True, i just find the spear pretty cool
There is a lot of Jesus relics, the cross, the cloth , the shroud, the nails, even the Grail hahaha! holy grail war, where he takes back what rightfully his, that would be some plot
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I was waiting for someone to mention Jesus. I am curious as to how detailed you can get with using Jesus as a servant.
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I was waiting for someone to mention Jesus. I am curious as to how detailed you can get with using Jesus as a servant.

Name: Jesus Christ
Class: Caster
Stats
Strength: C (only time physical force is the whipping at the church market)
Endurance: B (Temptation of Christ, where you go fasting for 40 days in the desert)
Agility: C
Magical Energy: A+
Luck: A+ (God in His Side)
Noble Phantasm: A+

Class Abilities
Healing and resurrection: Lazarus, the roman's ear, and multiple cases of healing
Somewhat Omnipotence : Ability to know the future
Divine nature: Can't really die, since he is full man and full God (going a bit theology)

Able to walk on water
Control Weather (in the lake )
Send things to death (fig tree)
Make infinite food (feeding of 4k and 5k)






Noble Phantasms
Revelation
Become

And in the midst of the seven candlesticks one like unto the Son of man, clothed with a garment down to the foot, and girt about the paps with a golden girdle.

14 His head and his hairs were white like wool, as white as snow; and his eyes were as a flame of fire;

15 And his feet like unto fine brass, as if they burned in a furnace; and his voice as the sound of many waters.
Rev 1:13-16
King of kings, and Lord of Lords.” He is riding triumphantly on a white horse—a symbol of conquest ( Rev 19:11-16).


Sword comes out of his mouth to destroy nations
Angelic Army to conquer the world

End of the world , a new world and a new heaven

I am alpha and omega
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Well me and Cyrus the Great won't stand a chance. You have chosen the only servant that can't be beat......well unless someone chose Chuck Norris.....sorry had to make the joke.
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Ctonhunter wrote:



I was waiting for someone to mention Jesus. I am curious as to how detailed you can get with using Jesus as a servant.

Name: Jesus Christ
Class: Caster
Stats
Strength: C (only time physical force is the whipping at the church market)
Endurance: B (Temptation of Christ, where you go fasting for 40 days in the desert)
Agility: C
Magical Energy: A+
Luck: A+ (God in His Side)
Noble Phantasm: A+

Class Abilities
Healing and resurrection: Lazarus, the roman's ear, and multiple cases of healing
Somewhat Omnipotence : Ability to know the future
Divine nature: Can't really die, since he is full man and full God (going a bit theology)

Able to walk on water
Control Weather (in the lake )
Send things to death (fig tree)
Make infinite food (feeding of 4k and 5k)






Noble Phantasms
Revelation
Become

And in the midst of the seven candlesticks one like unto the Son of man, clothed with a garment down to the foot, and girt about the paps with a golden girdle.

14 His head and his hairs were white like wool, as white as snow; and his eyes were as a flame of fire;

15 And his feet like unto fine brass, as if they burned in a furnace; and his voice as the sound of many waters.
Rev 1:13-16
King of kings, and Lord of Lords.” He is riding triumphantly on a white horse—a symbol of conquest ( Rev 19:11-16).


Sword comes out of his mouth to destroy nations
Angelic Army to conquer the world

End of the world , a new world and a new heaven

I am alpha and omega


Oh My GOD!! It's Brilliant
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JC is da best, moves like jaguar
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Name: St. Longinus


Took a few creative liberties with the background, hope it's not too much.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Saint_Longinus


And Fate never stretched any of their heroes? Look at Bluebeard!

Again, very nice interpretation!

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JC is da best, moves like jaguar


Wait that's a thing? Okay I really want to read that book.
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Hmm... Maybe I'll do Chinese Empress Lu Zhi next... *evil grin*
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Rider

Name: Guan Yu
Home: The Shu Kingdom of the Three Kingdoms era
Alignment: Lawful Good
Catalyst: a Peach taken from the gardens of Zhouzhou
Alternate class(es): Lancer

One of the greatest of legends produced by the chaos of the Three Kingdoms, Guan Yu was the mightiest of the Five Tiger generals of the Shu Han kingdom. He swore an oath of brotherhood to Liu Bei and Zhang Fei in a peach garden and thereafter served and protected Liu Bei in the dying days of the Han dynasty, and throughout the upheaval that followed. Famously the three brothers held off the mighty Lu Bu at the battle of Hu Lao pass, with Guan Yu eventually coming into possession of Lu Bu's peerless steed Red Hare after its owner's death years later. Guan Yu was fiercely loyal to his sworn brother returning to his side from the service of Cao Cao the moment he could be found. He fought valiantly in many campaigns thereafter until he was eventually slain by the Kingdom of Wu in defense of Jing province. His death spelled the beginning of the end for Shu Han, and his sworn brothers would not long outlive him. Guan Yu has since been venerated as a deity by many Chinese faiths, presiding over the righteous and those who honor bonds of fraternity.

Stats
Strength: B
Endurance: B
Agility: A+
Mana: C
Luck: D
Noble Phantasm: A+

Class Skills
Riding: A+
Guan Yu can use creatures on the level of divine and phantasmal beasts as mounts. However this ability does not give him the ability to ride dragons.
Magic Resistance: C
Cancel spells with a chant below two verses. Cannot defend against Magecraft on the level of High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals.

Personal Skills
Military Tactics: C
Tactical knowledge used not for one-on-one combat situations, but for battles where many are mobilized. Bonus modifiers are provided during use of one's own Anti-Army Noble Phantasm or when dealing against an enemy Anti-Army Noble Phantasm.

Charisma: C
The natural talent to command armies which bolsters the strength of allies in battle. As one of Shu Han's greatest commanders Guan Yu boasted a great deal of personal charisma enough to unify and command the armies that served him.

Instinct: A~A+
Allows Guan Yu to sense favorable outcomes for himself in battle, and halves any and all penalties which would be caused by visual or auditory impediment. At this level the instinct borders on true precognition. This ability comes from Guan Yu's years of battle where he was regarded as one of the most fearsome warriors of his age.

Divinity: C~B
After his death Guan Yu became the subject of worship, elevating him to a divine status bestowing upon him a level of divine grace.

Noble Phantasms

Green Dragon: Crescent Blade of Burning Ki-Rank B (Anti-Unit)
A legendary green Guan Dao, a weapon similar to a glaive, which is said to have been forged from the body of a green dragon. By calling upon it's name Guan Yu can cloak the blade in prana, manifesting in the form of burning ki. Whenever the blade strikes a target in this state the ki bursts outwards and inflicts potent damage upon the target in the form of a fiery detonation. While using this noble phantasm, Guan Yu himself temporarily gains the dragon attribute, rendering him susceptible to servants who have bonuses against dragons.

Saintly Emperor Guan: The Red Faced War Deity-Rank B (single unit-self)
A manifestation of the skills of one venerated as a god of the battlefield which bolsters Guan Yu's already great strength and prowess. Upon his death many faiths took to the worship of Guan Yu, with many considering him the Tao God of War. More precisely he blesses those who are righteous and honor bonds of brotherhood. Once the noble phantasm is activated Guan Yu is surrounded by an aura of light and his face turns a deep red as he is oft depicted in legend. In this state all of his parameters and martial skills are raised by one rank, and his divinity is further increased to rank B. While powerful, Guan Yu expends more prana in this state, and so must use it with discretion.

Red Hare: First Among Steeds-Rank A+ (Anti-Army)
Available only if Guan Yu has been summoned as a Rider, this noble phantasm calls forth the legendary steed of Lu Bu: Red Hare. Said to be the greatest of all horses legends speak of Red Hare clearing moats and bounding through cities at breathtaking speeds. Red Hare is capable of astonishing movement speeds, and can leap great distances and heights. But the true power of this noble phantasm lies in Red Hare's charge, where the steed accelerates to even greater speeds in a crimson blur devastating all in its path. In this state Guan Yu may still use his Guan Dao to strike at foes, with all damage dealt increased by one rank due to the force of the charge. The charge is costly however, so it is used either when it is sure to hit or when Rider is in dire need of it.
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Jesus Christ
Summoning tool: Spear of Longinus
Class: Caster


Hey now! .....Jesus would be Saver class. >.>
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I'm trying to do one based on Osiris as a Caster... This shit is hard...
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I choose you pikachu!

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