First  Prev  1  2  3  Next  Last
Post Reply My Comic Ink Soul
108 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
31 / M
Offline
Posted 2/24/15 , edited 3/3/15
Welcome to the world of Tattaow. In this world the soul can bring things you couldn't even imagine to life. Everyone living on Tattaow has powers waiting to be released and made stronger. On Tattaow the soul is not just on the inside but reflected on the out. We start our adventure following a young man with very big and strong soul which is only getting stronger. His name is Akshay and he may not know it yet but his soul is about to begin a wonderful journey that not only will change his world but the whole world of Tattaow as we know it.

PLEASE LEAVE FEEDBACK!

CHECK OUT MORE AT
https://www.facebook.com/InkSoulComics

108 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
31 / M
Offline
Posted 2/24/15
108 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
31 / M
Offline
Posted 2/24/15
More Coming Soon

108 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
31 / M
Offline
Posted 2/25/15
108 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
31 / M
Offline
Posted 2/25/15
108 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
31 / M
Offline
Posted 2/27/15
PAGE 1

108 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
31 / M
Offline
Posted 2/27/15
Repost Of Bigger Page 1

108 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
31 / M
Offline
Posted 2/27/15
PAGE 2 - PLEASE ENJOY AND LEAVE FEEDBACK



11012 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
Offline
Posted 3/1/15
I really like the art style, particularly the layering and shading. Impressive!!!
108 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
31 / M
Offline
Posted 3/1/15
Thanks the artist really is awesome with the layering. I appreciate the kind words.
108 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
31 / M
Offline
Posted 3/1/15
PAGE 3

108 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
31 / M
Offline
Posted 3/1/15
PAGE 4
PLEASE ENJOY AND LEAVE FEED BACK

108 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
31 / M
Offline
Posted 3/3/15
PAGE 5

585 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
30 / M / Center-of-US
Offline
Posted 3/3/15
I feel there should be more background. I suppose that's tricky with an action opening, but I don't feel invested in the conflict so far.

Also, in the description, I felt like one more sentence was needed when describing Tattaow in the first post. Soul is not just on the inside but out. And...

So, I guess I want a little sense of what the overall adventure will be. I wonder if the main draw is the main character, the world, or both. I haven't read anything distinctive about the MC yet, but the world definitely sparks some interest with the external soul aspect. So if the world is the draw, then I'd want a little more background about how residents deal with it day-to-day, or reasons bad guys might have to exploit it, etc.

All this said, I appreciate the work so far. Keep it up!
108 cr points
Send Message: Send PM GB Post
31 / M
Offline
Posted 3/4/15
Thanks for the great feedback! This was only preview which will be 8 pages. I wanted only to as you said spark interest to pull people in then hit them with the story. I'm not a known writer so people would not give me a fare shake or even give a second thought if I started out with slow dialog and story. Later in the comic I give a more background story and explain more of what's going on. I hope you will keep a look out for more from me. I really appreciate the feedback.
First  Prev  1  2  3  Next  Last
You must be logged in to post.