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Posted 6/16/08

Takumoto wrote:

Theres a way to look at life and a way to live it
theres a way to say thanks and a way give it
i read this one day on the way to the bus stop
and then i looked up and i can feel my heart drop
there she was standin there just like before
and all of a sudden the memories came back to me once more
i thought she moved away and id never see her again
but there she was standin with her best friend

it was like i couldnt breathe my friend said wats wrong
i said im cool well miss the bus if we take to long
so after school im in my bed lookin at the wall
at a picture of me and her and i can hear her call my name in my head so i think im goin crazy
then someone said its true love for ya baby
so now i cant sleep cause im thinkin about her
mostly thinkin about wat im gona do with out her
so at the next day of school im feeling so down
then i lift my head and start looking around
so as im sitting there watching the kids walk by
she walks up behind me touches my shoulder and says hi.



yes there is more but i want to see what you think about this first


i have one thing to say: amazing

one question: are all yur poems long ass like this
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Posted 6/16/08

rolldaball wrote:


Takumoto wrote:

Theres a way to look at life and a way to live it
theres a way to say thanks and a way give it
i read this one day on the way to the bus stop
and then i looked up and i can feel my heart drop
there she was standin there just like before
and all of a sudden the memories came back to me once more
i thought she moved away and id never see her again
but there she was standin with her best friend

it was like i couldnt breathe my friend said wats wrong
i said im cool well miss the bus if we take to long
so after school im in my bed lookin at the wall
at a picture of me and her and i can hear her call my name in my head so i think im goin crazy
then someone said its true love for ya baby
so now i cant sleep cause im thinkin about her
mostly thinkin about wat im gona do with out her
so at the next day of school im feeling so down
then i lift my head and start looking around
so as im sitting there watching the kids walk by
she walks up behind me touches my shoulder and says hi.



yes there is more but i want to see what you think about this first


i have one thing to say: amazing

one question: are all yur poems long ass like this


uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh yea .................i think so
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Posted 6/25/08

Takumoto wrote:


rolldaball wrote:


Takumoto wrote:

Theres a way to look at life and a way to live it
theres a way to say thanks and a way give it
i read this one day on the way to the bus stop
and then i looked up and i can feel my heart drop
there she was standin there just like before
and all of a sudden the memories came back to me once more
i thought she moved away and id never see her again
but there she was standin with her best friend

it was like i couldnt breathe my friend said wats wrong
i said im cool well miss the bus if we take to long
so after school im in my bed lookin at the wall
at a picture of me and her and i can hear her call my name in my head so i think im goin crazy
then someone said its true love for ya baby
so now i cant sleep cause im thinkin about her
mostly thinkin about wat im gona do with out her
so at the next day of school im feeling so down
then i lift my head and start looking around
so as im sitting there watching the kids walk by
she walks up behind me touches my shoulder and says hi.



yes there is more but i want to see what you think about this first


i have one thing to say: amazing

one question: are all yur poems long ass like this


uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh yea .................i think so



and how long does it take u to write them

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Posted 6/25/08

rolldaball wrote:


Takumoto wrote:


rolldaball wrote:


Takumoto wrote:

Theres a way to look at life and a way to live it
theres a way to say thanks and a way give it
i read this one day on the way to the bus stop
and then i looked up and i can feel my heart drop
there she was standin there just like before
and all of a sudden the memories came back to me once more
i thought she moved away and id never see her again
but there she was standin with her best friend

it was like i couldnt breathe my friend said wats wrong
i said im cool well miss the bus if we take to long
so after school im in my bed lookin at the wall
at a picture of me and her and i can hear her call my name in my head so i think im goin crazy
then someone said its true love for ya baby
so now i cant sleep cause im thinkin about her
mostly thinkin about wat im gona do with out her
so at the next day of school im feeling so down
then i lift my head and start looking around
so as im sitting there watching the kids walk by
she walks up behind me touches my shoulder and says hi.



yes there is more but i want to see what you think about this first


i have one thing to say: amazing

one question: are all yur poems long ass like this


uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh yea .................i think so



and how long does it take u to write them



ummm maybe 2 0r 3 days
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Posted 6/25/08

rolldaball wrote:


Takumoto wrote:


rolldaball wrote:


Takumoto wrote:

Theres a way to look at life and a way to live it
theres a way to say thanks and a way give it
i read this one day on the way to the bus stop
and then i looked up and i can feel my heart drop
there she was standin there just like before
and all of a sudden the memories came back to me once more
i thought she moved away and id never see her again
but there she was standin with her best friend

it was like i couldnt breathe my friend said wats wrong
i said im cool well miss the bus if we take to long
so after school im in my bed lookin at the wall
at a picture of me and her and i can hear her call my name in my head so i think im goin crazy
then someone said its true love for ya baby
so now i cant sleep cause im thinkin about her
mostly thinkin about wat im gona do with out her
so at the next day of school im feeling so down
then i lift my head and start looking around
so as im sitting there watching the kids walk by
she walks up behind me touches my shoulder and says hi.



yes there is more but i want to see what you think about this first


i have one thing to say: amazing

one question: are all yur poems long ass like this


uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh yea .................i think so



and how long does it take u to write them



or more. (mostly more)
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Posted 6/26/08

Takumoto wrote:


rolldaball wrote:


Takumoto wrote:


rolldaball wrote:


Takumoto wrote:

Theres a way to look at life and a way to live it
theres a way to say thanks and a way give it
i read this one day on the way to the bus stop
and then i looked up and i can feel my heart drop
there she was standin there just like before
and all of a sudden the memories came back to me once more
i thought she moved away and id never see her again
but there she was standin with her best friend

it was like i couldnt breathe my friend said wats wrong
i said im cool well miss the bus if we take to long
so after school im in my bed lookin at the wall
at a picture of me and her and i can hear her call my name in my head so i think im goin crazy
then someone said its true love for ya baby
so now i cant sleep cause im thinkin about her
mostly thinkin about wat im gona do with out her
so at the next day of school im feeling so down
then i lift my head and start looking around
so as im sitting there watching the kids walk by
she walks up behind me touches my shoulder and says hi.



yes there is more but i want to see what you think about this first


i have one thing to say: amazing

one question: are all yur poems long ass like this


uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh yea .................i think so



and how long does it take u to write them



or more. (mostly more)


u amaze me
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Posted 6/26/08

rolldaball wrote:


Takumoto wrote:


rolldaball wrote:


Takumoto wrote:


rolldaball wrote:


Takumoto wrote:

Theres a way to look at life and a way to live it
theres a way to say thanks and a way give it
i read this one day on the way to the bus stop
and then i looked up and i can feel my heart drop
there she was standin there just like before
and all of a sudden the memories came back to me once more
i thought she moved away and id never see her again
but there she was standin with her best friend

it was like i couldnt breathe my friend said wats wrong
i said im cool well miss the bus if we take to long
so after school im in my bed lookin at the wall
at a picture of me and her and i can hear her call my name in my head so i think im goin crazy
then someone said its true love for ya baby
so now i cant sleep cause im thinkin about her
mostly thinkin about wat im gona do with out her
so at the next day of school im feeling so down
then i lift my head and start looking around
so as im sitting there watching the kids walk by
she walks up behind me touches my should er and says hi.



yes there is more but i want to see what you think about this first


i have one thing to say: amazing

one question: are all yur poems long ass like this


uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh yea .................i think so



and how long does it take u to write them



or more. (mostly more)


u amaze me


and why is that
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Posted 7/7/08
cause u write amazing poems
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rolldaball wrote:

cause u write amazing poems


well thanks that is much obliged
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Posted 7/8/08

Takumoto wrote:


rolldaball wrote:

cause u write amazing poems


well thanks that is much obliged


can u plz write that in english
also yur vocabulary i amazing
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Posted 7/8/08

rolldaball wrote:


Takumoto wrote:


rolldaball wrote:

cause u write amazing poems


well thanks that is much obliged


can u plz write that in english
also yur vocabulary i amazing


umm in other words i appreciate it.
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