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Posted 4/29/15
So, I have just recently start a channel on youtube where I review anime. My first review is a review on Your Lie In April. Would love to hear some feedback from the community. If you enjoy the videos, please leave a like an Subscribe. My hope is to make content by-weekly on the channel. Let me know in the comments what you would like to see reviewed or what kind of anime content you want to see.

Thank you all for your support!


Jer Talks Reviews.

First Video Review: https://youtu.be/ucz4Ojud2fQ

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Posted 4/30/15
It's "heroine". I only mention that, because I'm seeing HEROIN DONE RIGHT! and HEROIN DONE WRONG! on the video and it distracts me for the obvious reason. There's also IS NO AS SATISFYING and THE EXPERICE. For what little text you provide, there's really no excuse for simple typos, unless English is not your first language, of course.

The ratings shown during each section are unnecessary. You are quite clear about your opinions.

You recycle words frequently within short periods of time: "...animation, characters, animations, characters, animation... dub, dub, dub, dub... show, show, show, show."

The video runs for seventeen minutes, and I'm quite aware of it, because I kept looking down at the time remaining. I enjoy listening to your voice, but that doesn't matter much if what you have to say is bland. Express yourself a bit more, and I don't mean doing something like a fist bump into the camera or screaming, "What's up, everybody!" Just toss in some charisma. Some zest. Some spice. Some flavor.

It's only your first review. I expected it to be... not perfect. I subscribed as a form of encouragement, because where's the incentive to improve if no one's willing to watch?

Lastly, I apologize if my criticism is harsh. Tact is not one of my strong traits. Besides, I'm an idiot, so what is my opinion really worth?
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