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Posted 5/27/15
only a few rules -

1. cant post twice in a row
2. try not to write too much all in one go - limit yourself to a paragraph (or two, if your paragraphs aren't huge)
3. your post must tie in with the story so far (don't write randomly please!)


Genre: Romance/Action
Setting: Crashed Plane
Narration Style: 3rd person from different character's perspectives


~ happy writing !



PS: this first post will be updated regularly with a general synopsis of what's happened so far, but it's advised that you read through previous posts before adding to the story


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Posted 5/27/15
He opened his eyes to the sound of water crashing against the coast, and the smell of smoke in the air. His head was throbbing from the impact, it was a miracle he survived. He unfastened his seat belt and stood up, looking around it was plain to see he was somewhere tropical. An island perhaps? He walked to the other end of the plain, the rest of the passengers were either passed out, or dead. He was getting anxious, his love was nowhere to found on the plane...
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Posted 5/28/15
His mind started racing, his eyes filled with tears. It can't be; this can't be... He tried to take a deep breath but there was a huge pain in his chest. He knew he needed to calm down, otherwise this would go nowhere. As he closed his eyes to gather himself, the flashbacks started.
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Posted 5/28/15
~Six Hours Earlier~

"Babe! Babe! Come on wake up!" He was jostled awake on the plane by the frantic whispers of Ilya, his love. "Wh-what is it? What's going on?" He grumbled through his sleep. "Follow me." She says. He gets up, and she leads him to the bathroom. She winks at him and says "Welcome to the Mile High Club".

~Three Hours Earlier~

"This is your Captain speaking, I need everyone to stay calm."

~Four Days Earlier~

"Hey baby girl! Guess what! I won us plane tickets to Japan!"

As quickly as they came, the flashbacks ended, his panic subsiding, he had a new determination.
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Posted 5/29/15
He heard something moving through the vegetation surrounding the beach. He wasn't sure what was there. With steadfast attitude, he approached the exotic bushes that served as an organic curtain to cover up the unknown. "Is someone there?" he said, trying to keep his voice from trembling.

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The woman looked at the man from behind the green foliage. She was unsure. How was she supposed to answer that question after being trapped in that island for 5 years? After seeing what she had seen? Was there really someone there, inside that shell of hers, that she once called her body?
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She stood still a moment, watching the unknown male before retreating somewhat into the surrounding undergrowth. No, not today but perhaps soon she would introduce herself to this newcomer. She had learned long ago that she could not trust strangers. Even in the past years, they had proven to be nothing but trouble. Her silent movements are unnoticed but she would continue to watch him closely.

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The man glances around, still uneasy with a feeling of being watched. He closes his eyes tightly, shaking his head, then rubbing it with a building headache. "Come on out if you're there"

He watches closely, listening to the silence until the strange sounds of animals started to reach him. First a bird, singing a foreign song to his ears. Before long his ears are filled with the calls of creatures that are entirely unfamiliar to him.

He shakes his head before continuing his search. He mutters softly to himself. "I must be losing my mind..."
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Posted 5/30/15
He leans against a tropical tree to rest. He closes his eyes and tries to piece together his location. The plane had been heading to Tokyo and had left from Florida. So he was either stranded in the Sea of Japan or the Pacific Ocean. He mentally berates himself for not paying more attention to the plane's location before the crash. What could he do? He didn't know how large the island was or if there was an indigenous population. He massages his temple with a frown. What to do, what to do.

That's when he hears it. The cliche snap of a tree branch. He nervously scans his surroundings. "Who's there?" He calls out. Silence was the only response he received. Should he move on or should he investigate the noise?.
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Posted 6/1/15
Before the man had a chance to investigate the noise, he was suddenly surrounded by men, each with a spear pointed at him. He put his hands up in surrender, and they escorted him away from the plane to their village. Once inside, he saw the faces of several other members from the plane, all of them tied up. He searched them for his lover, but she was nowhere to be found, he was beginning to despair. Perhaps she had been lost in the crash? A wave of grief hits him as he is led to the group and tied up.
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Posted 6/15/15
she watched them take him. she'd watched all of the survivors be taken. soon she would probably have to report back to him and tell him of the new developments. he really piqued her curiosity though. the look on his face as he searched.. surely it was for something precious. maybe someone precious? i lost a precious thing too, once. when the darkness falls i will look. maybe i can find his precious something? turning her back to the camp, she retreated to her vantage point over the wreckage.
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Posted 6/15/15
He tried to break free, but it was no good, the ropes, or what appeared to be ropes, were too strong. Suddenly, everyone in the area, even his captors, went quiet. Someone approached them, a blindfolded man, wearing a strange tunic decorated with bones and plants.

He seemed to be the leader of the group that had taken them prisoners. The blindfolded man began to speak, and although it was clear to him it was some unknown language, he could actually understand everything that he said "You have been brought to this island by the Green One, you will participate in the trials to come-"

"I'm not doin' nothin'!!" one of the tied up passengers interrupted "our plane crashed, there ain't no green one that brought us- uuurrk!!" He could not finish the sentence, the blindfolded man, outstandingly, threw a perfectly aimed knife at his throat, killing him. How could he possibly do that without even looking?
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"Temperance brother, lest we fall as savages." The words seem to come from the forest. "They must serve the trials."

This voice is very childlike despite the age of the words. It becomes more clear when a figure in a brown robe steps out from the nearby jungle. The others step away from her.

"I may be blind, but I see more than ever. Betrayal waits in the camp... death watches from above and one of these strangers may pass the trial, but may also call death to our clans'"

She removes her hood, revealing a girl who appears to be in her mid to late teens. Black hair is braided tightly over one shoulder and her eyes... rather than irises her eyes are set with pale milky moon colored disks. Perhaps a symptom of whatever has made her blind.
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