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Fayt99 
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Posted 5/30/15
So I've been writing and designing a story for about a year now (mostly back story and character profiles) and I just wanted to share a picture of my design for my main male lead character (Leaning towards the name Fayel). I also have a uniform designed but in this close up he isn't wearing it yet. I have many drawings but I wanna get farther before showing too much. Anyways just let me know what you think of his basic design Lol
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Posted 5/30/15
Seems cool looking so far.
Fayt99 
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Posted 5/30/15
Thanks Lol I realize it's pretty plain, I just don't wanna show too much yet
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Posted 5/30/15
Nah that's understandable when you work on characters design and such.
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Posted 5/30/15
looks like an animated picture of yourself. NOICE!
Posted 5/30/15
E look like U M8! xD
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Posted 5/30/15

Fayt99 wrote:

So I've been writing and designing a story for about a year now (mostly back story and character profiles) and I just wanted to share a picture of my design for my main male lead character

(Leaning towards the name Fayel). I also have a uniform designed but in this close up he isn't wearing it yet. I have many drawings but I wanna get farther before showing too much. Anyways just let me know what you think of his basic design Lol


I like it. I've gone ahead and moved the thread to our "Creative Corner" forum.

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Posted 5/30/15 , edited 5/30/15

coolest7000 wrote:

looks like an animated picture of yourself. NOICE!


I second that, a pretty good drawing though!
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Posted 5/31/15
Kickass job on the hair!!
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Posted 5/31/15
Two things stand out to me.

That jawline is drawn in a nice masculine style, but the nose and mouth are drawn in a way typically associated with feminine traits.

The collar of that shirt is close to the skin at the top but where it connects to the shoulder it seems to pull away, collars usually flow loose at the top and rest against the shoulder. Being that the collarbone and pectoralis major lines are clearly visible I assume this shirt is meant to be skin-tight so the issue may actually be the right (the character's right) shoulder shape and/or height may be off.

Other than those two issues, good job.
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Hair looks great I get tired of same hair design over and over again. For some reason eye patch always stands out to me not sure if that's great but I like it for future reference or dust mask?
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