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Posted 8/8/15
Base-story line to come..
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16 / M / Devon, UK
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Posted 8/8/15
Okay, heres the Base story


So, its based in the 1950's a post apocalyptic wasteland, theres a small village with a tiny military detachment We're a squad of 8 guys, Officer, the 2nd in command, both get assault rifles ,two of my comrades form the machine gun crew ,a tsundere sniper dude, two guys with rifles and the last guy with a submachinegun
So we're in this village, there’s a small guard tower on the edge of the village, a relative large stone centre building half church/half townhall with about 5 small wooden houses gathered around the centre, in front of the guard tower, around 50 meters or so, is a river with a wooden bridge crossing. So in the village there are various sub characters such as shopkeeps and craftsmen, along with love interests, and there’s a situation where the 2nd in command likes a village girl, but that girl likes the sniper (which leads to an interesting story change) but the sniper(tsundere) is not interested in her, but she still tries anyway, so then fast forward a few important story features ( i have them in mind but cant be bothered to write out yet) comes the deaths! so the an enemy force has been told to take the bridge and the village, and its on a mild spring afternoon when the telephone rings, and hours later they can see enemy troops approaching( oh and at this point the two rifle guys now have alight anti tank/vehicle gun) the first skirmish wave of around 12 men engage the group, 4 of them are killed and 3 wounded, so they fall back, the smg guy get wounded, but its nothing serious, during the night another group of enemies tries to cross the bridge, here the sniper is killed, and one of the manchinegun team is heavily wounded, the girl from earlier mourns the loss of her love interest (sniper), but the 2nd in command goes to his side and they become a thing, and do lovey dovey stuff until morning, where the officer quickly rushes into their room with blood and sweat dripping from his body, as he tell him that they're back again, this time there’s light artillery shells falling around the village, and machinegunner guy dies infront of his comrade, who then proceeds to get enraged, picks up the machine gun, holds it by the hip and blasts his way through their attack, (meanwhile) the At gun crew are fighting off a small tank, which now is quite damaged, the tank sees the gunner blazing away killing everything, turns its turret, and shooting him, cutting him in two, and at the same time, the gun crew get a shot into the turret of the tank, finally destroying it, but its too late to save the gunner as the enemy retreat again.
So now there are 5 guys left and a force of 30 guys backed up by a tank proceed to storm the bridge, destroying the guard tower, and entering the village itself, the gun crew gets caught from behind by two guys with sub machine guns and die together, slumped over the gun, so now it’s the officer, the 2nd in command and the smg guy, we are in a fortified position as we try to defend ourselves, picking off a few guys, but the smg guy gets caught in a grenade blast as he tries to get ammo, so now its just the officerand the 2nd in command left, back to back shooting, we make our way out of the village, with the enemy pursuing, the 2nd in command gets shot in the leg and falls to the ground, still defiantly shooting, he looks at me, passes the officer his empty gun and dogtags, picks up his grenades, hides them in his battle coat, and tells the officer to cover him, and indicates the edge of the village, the officer looks at him, eyes welling up with tears, simply nods, and says, "thank you" and get to position... as the 2nd in command plays dead, the enemy cautiously approaches him and checks his body, he leaps up, pulls the pins out of his grenades and shouts an almost inaudible last cry, as flames and shrapnel engulf the area, killing himself and the enemy around him
I’m all that’s left, the officer pulls himself together, checks his weapon, and finds some ammo for his fallen comrades gun, and makes his way to the central stone building, under a hail of rifle and machinegun fire, he enters the building, and sets up a position by the window on the stairs, and begins to fire, his last stand, the ammo of his gun runs out just as two enemy soldiers enter and run up the stairs, he throws the empty gun at them, knocking one down, and takes his combat knife and lob it at the other, who is raising his rifle, gets hit in the heart by the knife, and falls backwards, he pulls out his comrades gun, kisses the barrel, and makes his way down the stairs, shooting the guy at the bottom, he peeks out the door, to be met with a withering maelstrom of bullets, and gets back quickly, there is a slowing of gunfire, and footsteps approaching his location. He pulls the pin on his final grenade and throw it out the door, hearing a shocked cry of terror before a loud explosion, he bursts out of the door, aims his gun, and runs toward the enemy machine gun behind the sandbags, his final move, he runs and fires at the position screaming in a twisted and broken state, tears, blood and sweat dripping from his torn uniform, and then a volley of bullets hits their mark, striking him in the torso, ripping holes in his body, he slumps down, 5 meters from the MG, lifeless. the battle for the village is over. 8 men down, 7 comrades lost... (then some closing lines with really moving emotions) The End.
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