Post Reply my first one: One Punch Man AMV- any feedback is great!
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Posted 11/13/15 , edited 11/13/15
I was inspired by my friends hunterxhunter amv so i tried to make my own, any tips or friendly criticism is welcome

one thing im not too familiar with is transitions and when to apply certain ones so it may look alittle funky lol
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ivYwKsO7UHo
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Posted 11/13/15
Haha it wasn't bad, I didn't really care for the song choice... I'm not an expert so I can't give you an in-depth critique but like you pointed out some of the transitions felt choppy and awkward especially in the beginning, but they kind of mellowed out towards the end. Lastly, I felt you needed to work on lining up the high points in the scenes with the high points in the song if that makes sense, other than that though it looked good.
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Posted 11/13/15
I see what you are saying thanks for the input. this took me maybe 3 hours to make so if i spend maybe a day or more making one im sure it will be a lot better. thanks again
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Posted 11/17/15
it seems good
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