Post Reply Looking for a reader/editor for a Skip Beat! fanfiction of mine!
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Posted 2/8/16
Recently, I began writing what I THOUGHT would be a cute, simple fic that would take me, eh, a week to write or something. And now, three weeks later, I'm closing in on 300 typed pages and 120,000 words and I'm no where near finished. I have a fully fleshed out story line that's missing an ending and I have no idea as to the quality of my work, I REALLY love it myself though and I'm thinking of publishing it for other people to enjoy on fan websites. I wanted to see if someone (I think they're called betas) would read and edits some of my work and tell me what they think, as well as critique the story line and help me with the ending.

Word of warning, it's an AU where Kyoko is replaced by my OC and several characters are therefore missing. I know these fics sometimes detour readers, as I myself often skip over ones with OCs, but if you're someone willing to give a new character a try, I promise you'll get attached to her. The idea is to take Kyoko out of the storyline, but still have events progress close if not exactly parallel to Skip Beat!'s story line. Basically, every arc of the original is mirrored in my story and the endings are about the same, as well as the elements within the arcs. If you're willing to give this a try, I would LOVE and SUPER appreciate feedback and anyone to point out things I missed. If you need any more information or would like to read it, send me an email at [email protected] and I'll link you everything you need.

Any and all responses would be greatly appreciated and I would love to have your feedback! Spread this around if you can, I'd really like people to read all the work I've put into this! Love you all!

Sassifrass~
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Posted 4/12/16
Are you looking for a editor for story structure? Clarity? Internal consistency? Format (heaven help me)? I edit for other authors and this is my favorite manga so I'm interested, but if you want someone to check your grammar I'd really rather not.
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Posted 4/17/16
It's more or less just someone willing to brain storm with me and basically improve on the story itself, not necessarily anything grammar or structure based. Second opinions on things like how realistic, in character, or natural scenes are would be amazing, and there are some parts I can't really figure out what should happen exactly.

I've been posting the first portion of it here if you want to read a bit before agreeing to help: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11851371/1/Rapid-Pulse

If you like what you see and you'd want to help me, I can give you access to all the chapters I've written and everything I have planned out. It'll take you a while to sift through and read because it's no joke, there's a lot of material. I guarantee it's well written for the most part and I've put a lot of my heart into it, it's been a long standing project of mine.
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Posted 4/23/16 , edited 4/23/16
All right, I have read everything that you have posted up to Ch 17. I'm going to be really honest here. I think helping you is beyond me right now. While I love what you are doing, I can tell just from the first chapters that the volume of work is going to be astounding. I simply lack the time to work on it at this point. . Ill be waiting on your updates. Check your PM for more details.

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