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Posted 3/18/16 , edited 3/18/16
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its good. very well put together. tho your melody needs more...more. try throwing in some 5ths.
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nemoskull wrote:

its good. very well put together. tho your melody needs more...more. try throwing in some 5ths.


Okay, thanks for the feedback i appreciate it. And i agree i shouldve added something to the main melody :/
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