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Posted 3/18/16 , edited 3/18/16
https://soundcloud.com/ibbykurda/lost-reality

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Posted 3/18/16 , edited 3/18/16
its good. very well put together. tho your melody needs more...more. try throwing in some 5ths.
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Posted 3/18/16 , edited 3/18/16

nemoskull wrote:

its good. very well put together. tho your melody needs more...more. try throwing in some 5ths.


Okay, thanks for the feedback i appreciate it. And i agree i shouldve added something to the main melody :/
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Posted 12/24/17 , edited 12/24/17
Year-end cleanup. Closing threads with no new posts since 12/31/2016.
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