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F / ಌNYC, the BIG APPLEಌ
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Posted 8/24/07
School is gonna start
more problem will just happened
more work but less time
Posted 8/24/07
more work but less time
less time to make you be mine
it's not enough time
Posted 9/4/07
In the road of life
How short the day can become
Of bitter and glee
Posted 9/4/07
Of bitter and glee...
i don't know what to say now
i've no idea
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29 / M / Aboard the Hyperion
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Posted 9/4/07
I've no idea
And so I say to myself
I'm an empty shelf
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25 / M / Australia
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Posted 9/4/07
I'm an empty shelf
though my soul is clean and pure
obvious yet absurd
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26 / M / Philippinas
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Posted 9/4/07
obvious yet absurd
the pigs can fly
floating around with yellow monkeys
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25 / M / Australia
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Posted 9/4/07
^ thats no haiku

haiku has 3 lines, 1st line = 5 syllables, 2nd line = 7 syllables and 3rd line = 5 syllables again.
Posted 9/5/07
I'll just continue somehow.

Yellow Monkeys
Floating about like pigs
Obviously wrong
Posted 9/8/07

vajmichael wrote:

I'll just continue somehow.

Yellow Monkeys
Floating about like pigs
Obviously wrong



ur haiku's wrong as well..
yellow monkeys - 4 syl
floating about like pigs - 6 syl

anyway..

obviously wrong
i know i am wrong because
i don't understand
Posted 9/8/07
what i am here for
there is only one reason
to watch anime
Posted 9/8/07
until i can leave
i'll do what i want to do
no one could stop me
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29 / F / Crunchyland! :)
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Posted 9/18/07
no one could stop me
I am on top of the world
my guilty pleasure
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23 / M / tethe'alla
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Posted 9/18/07
my guilty pleasure
from killing all those people
but it felt so good
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29 / F / Crunchyland! :)
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Posted 9/18/07
but it felt so good
to take the pain out of me
by cutting myself
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