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Post Reply I need assistance deciding on which plot to use for a story
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Posted 5/1/16

qualeshia3 wrote:

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A. Rosanna is a misanthropic princess of a foreign nation. She wants nothing more than to see human die out and she yearns for a war. When the world enters a war, she gladly welcomes it but soon learns that she should be careful what she wishes for.

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D. A teenage boy name Christopher learns that he is the son of a god-emperor who was placed on a planet during the war in the realm of the gods. Christopher also learns that an evil god has been awaken from his slumber. The evil god looks for minions to help him fight against the forces of good and take over the planet. Christopher has been given a duty by his birth father to slay the evil god with the help of the divine knights.

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Rosanna is of a non-human race. She hates humanity and their deities and wishes their demise. Rosanna seeks the aid of evil forces to begin a coup de grace to eradicate the miserable existence of humans. In turn, Christopher, a teenage boy (DOES HE ABSOLUTELY INDISPUTABLY HAS TO BE A TEEN?), learns that he is a demigod. He learns of the awakening of an evil god and the threat to humanity; Christopher must fulfill the prophecy: become the new leader of the divine knights and embark on a crusade to save humanity.

Perhaps you could make it so that Christopher fall in love with Rosanna, adding huge conflicts of interest. Make it so Rosanna's family was massacred by humans and have her abused, hence explaining her hatred. Having Rosanna actually discover later on that she is actually half human. Based on that you could also add certain issues regarding the pact she makes with the evil god for the demise of all humans; by that I mean having her half-die in a symbolic way (lost of humanity).

Anyways is up to you. That is my suggestion. Hope you like it.
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Posted 5/2/16


This is good.

Is Rosanna still a princess in yours?
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She could be. What about having her family killed because they were part of the nobleness, hence more reason for hatred.
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DViper15 wrote:



She could be. What about having her family killed because they were part of the nobleness, hence more reason for hatred.


Cool with me.
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