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I think all of your melodies(?) need to be strengthened quite a bit, especially the one starting at 0:15. It isn't interesting enough to carry the song like it needs to (I also think it should start on the lowest note and ascend from there instead of starting on the middle note and descend, but that might just be me).

Also, I think your "Zod Beats" intro is tremendously unnecessary.
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sundin13 wrote:

I think all of your melodies(?) need to be strengthened quite a bit, especially the one starting at 0:15. It isn't interesting enough to carry the song like it needs to (I also think it should start on the lowest note and ascend from there instead of starting on the middle note and descend, but that might just be me).

Also, I think your "Zod Beats" intro is tremendously unnecessary.


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