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Judge my new song

https://youtu.be/GXS6EIjoe6Q
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Too random...it was giving me a headache...maybe in a crowded bar and there was a cute girl in front of me, maybe...
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Bankshot wrote:

Too random...it was giving me a headache...maybe in a crowded bar and there was a cute girl in front of me, maybe...


what do you usually listen to?
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iambetterthanyou wrote:


Bankshot wrote:

Too random...it was giving me a headache...maybe in a crowded bar and there was a cute girl in front of me, maybe...


what do you usually listen to?


Mostly House music, down beat, Channel 53 on the XM/Sirrus Radio...So yeah, I'm biased and set in my ways!
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there's no beginning ner ending

plus hearing sounds so sharp just makes me wanna pasue it
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LubbockNR wrote:

there's no beginning ner ending

plus hearing sounds so sharp just makes me wanna pasue it


everything has a beginning and an ending. it doesn't sound sharp to me...i'll have to look in to it.
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I listen to a lot of electronic music (starting in 1978 with Kraftwerk) and while I think there are some good elements in your song (love the drum sound), I think it's a bit overly complex and chaotic. Thin it out a bit. Drop some of the higher pitched synths. Maybe shoot for something like a couple of the new Underworld songs:

- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uxELB8NMBWk (Twenty-Three Blue) Somewhat dark.

And actually, your drum work reminds me a bit of their song I Exhale:

- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jvpOxrix0HE&

Anyway.... keep at it. Always love fresh music.
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Hairbelly wrote:



I listen to a lot of electronic music (starting in 1978 with Kraftwerk) and while I think there are some good elements in your song (love the drum sound), I think it's a bit overly complex and chaotic. Thin it out a bit. Drop some of the higher pitched synths. Maybe shoot for something like a couple of the new Underworld songs:

- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uxELB8NMBWk (Twenty-Three Blue) Somewhat dark.

And actually, your drum work reminds me a bit of their song I Exhale:

- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jvpOxrix0HE&

Anyway.... keep at it. Always love fresh music.

Thanks for the tips
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It ripped through my ear holes like an edgy teen through Hot Topic.
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Lethargic_leopard_Seal wrote:

It ripped through my ear holes like an edgy teen through Hot Topic.


Thanks babe
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