Post Reply ~Fear~
Posted 2/11/08 , edited 2/11/08
Fear

It strikes you in the heart
A grip that won’t let go
It makes you feel despair
This feeling only grows

It keeps you in the dark
And shadows over you
It present at all times
In all you say and do

It paralyzes you
And holds you back in life
It’s hard to overcome
This feeling brings such strife

Its suffocating grip
It chokes you with its hold
It stops you from so much
Cause its grip is too cold

It’s hard to escape it
Not many really can
It takes lots of courage
The fight has just began

If you lose in this fight
The dark swallows you whole
You can’t escape the pit
The fight has took its toll

You start to drift away
So far into the dark
All hope is left and gone
Fear has made its final mark
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Posted 2/12/08

kagura4 wrote:

Fear

It strikes you in the heart
A grip that won’t let go
It makes you feel despair
This feeling only grows

It keeps you in the dark
And shadows over you
It present at all times
In all you say and do

It paralyzes you
And holds you back in life
It’s hard to overcome
This feeling brings such strife

Its suffocating grip
It chokes you with its hold
It stops you from so much
Cause its grip is too cold

It’s hard to escape it
Not many really can
It takes lots of courage
The fight has just began

If you lose in this fight
The dark swallows you whole
You can’t escape the pit
The fight has took its toll

You start to drift away
So far into the dark
All hope is left and gone
Fear has made its final mark


You have done a great job =3
its not easy too write about it, but you can write how you see fear
Posted 2/12/08

Yamira wrote:


kagura4 wrote:

Fear

It strikes you in the heart
A grip that won’t let go
It makes you feel despair
This feeling only grows

It keeps you in the dark
And shadows over you
It present at all times
In all you say and do

It paralyzes you
And holds you back in life
It’s hard to overcome
This feeling brings such strife

Its suffocating grip
It chokes you with its hold
It stops you from so much
Cause its grip is too cold

It’s hard to escape it
Not many really can
It takes lots of courage
The fight has just began

If you lose in this fight
The dark swallows you whole
You can’t escape the pit
The fight has took its toll

You start to drift away
So far into the dark
All hope is left and gone
Fear has made its final mark


You have done a great job =3
its not easy too write about it, but you can write how you see fear


lol thanx, -_-'' I kno wat u mean it took me so long just to write that,..i didn't like my first few copys
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Posted 2/15/08
Good!!!...u feel it!!!...That amotion is hard to say!!!...Congratulations
Posted 2/16/08

david_k_belanova wrote:

Good!!!...u feel it!!!...That amotion is hard to say!!!...Congratulations


thanx, ya it is ...u should try!
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