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Let me know if a thread like this one exist or not.
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Here is the newly revise plot to this novel that I am working on. Tell me what you think. What changes should I make to have the story come out good? Let me know if this is a good plot.

Title:
The Chronicles of Arikaisha

Setting:
Grand Empire Arikaisha

Genres:
Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Action, Adventure, Military, War, Tragedy, and Science-Fiction

POV:
Third-Person

Premise:
Ten people struggle to make their dreams and goals a reality while enduring the hardships of life.

Plot:
The story revolves around the lives of ten people who are struggling to make their goals a reality. These are the types of goals and dreams that will change their lives forever. They'll learn that life isn't kind to anyone. These people will stop at nothing to achieve their goals They may be wealthy but that won't stop them from reaching their dreams and goals through the tough realities of life. Can they do it?

Main Characters:

Demetrius Alexander Zachariah Arionheart: Seventh Grand-Prince of Arikaisha. His goal is to rid the world of legal criminals that are destroying the world.

Rosamaria Valencia Marianne Eisenhower: Crown Princess of Kenorland. Her goal is to make her country prosperous once again.

Brick Cray Ezra Ackerman: Prince of Borussia. His goal is to become the greatest Grand-Knight.

Kylantha Sherridan/ Moranna Cosmina Delphinia Rosencrown: Princess of Cimmeria. Her goal is to find her long lost older brother who needs to save his country.

Artlin Alcoy Gheraldo Miliandro: Prince of the Miliandro Mafia. His goal is to stop his father from starting a mafia war

Natalia Julienne Amanda Knightley Princess of Avantica. Her goal is to stop her mother from starting a major war with the other nations.

Elijah Saul Joshua Carthage: Crown Prince of Epiphania. His goal is to stop his father by helping the commoners revolt against him.

Carrera Anthonia Juliandra Veckendeck-Lilsmen: Crown Princess of Amon. Her goal is to find the man who assassinated her father.

Jericho Armando Henry Wintergreen: Crown Prince of Marchovia. His goal is to find his younger sister who was kidnapped and stop his father from creating an atomic bomb.

Lunaria Parthena Anchoretta Ravensword: Princess of Jachira. Her goal is to find the men who destroyed her village when she was younger.
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I posted in your previous thread. The previous version was better, see my comments there.
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LavenderMintRose wrote:

I posted in your previous thread. The previous version was better, see my comments there.


I seen it.
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