Plot Breakdown Thread
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Here is the breaking down of the plot to The Chronicles of Arikaisha. If you have any question, feel free to ask them as I will try my very best to answer them. If there are any changes I should make, let me know. Excuse my terrible grammar.

1) On January 5, 9001 NIRE(Neo Imperial Royal Era), Grand-Emperor Vincent was shot to death by a Promethean nationalist from Kenorland name Julliard Harken. During that year, the Kenorland Chancellor invaded the countries Borussia, Neo-Germania, Cimmeria, and Avantica then killed their leaders. The weapon that Julliard used to kill Grand-Emperor Vincent wasa GSM(God Slaying Machine). Vincent was presume dead after an hour of getting shot.

2) Also during the same year, the Prometheans were captured and placed in concentration camps. This started the Promethean Holocaust where twenty million Prometheans were place in gas chambers and forced to undergo torture methods.

3) Avantica and Breavaria gets into a war over who shall own the nation of Nuna. Kenorland intervenes and wins the war. This happens all in the same year of 9001.

4) In the year 9002 NIRE, the world enters it's first war and far more brutal than any war. Countries are fighting against each other along with having civil wars as well. Prometheans and Neo-Sapiens are fighting over rights that they feel they deserve. During the time of the war, Grand-Empress Griselda has been assassinated while on her goodwill tour to other planets. Noone knows who did it but she was likely poisoned around the end of her goodwill tour in Eathrion. Tension between Eathrion and Arikaisha are on high.

5)The world war ends in the year 9015 NIRE. The world is still in chaos over what happened. Neo-Sapiens and Prometheans still hates each other deeply along with the nations not getting along with each other. By the end of the year 9015 NIRE, two organizations name CUFF and EAON were born. EAON goal is to help poverty stricken nations get back on their feet while CUFF goal is to help commoners by getting rid of upper class citizens. CUFF and EAON team up and work together to end royalty and nobilty. So far they have already killed a few wealthy
people.

6) The world goes into chaos for at least three hundred years but there hasn't been any world wars. Kenorland has finally reach it's peak as the most powerful nation in the world. It has ownership of five nations known as Maria, Vince, Azaria, Cyril, and Solaria. These nations have been stripped of their names, right, culture, and tradition and became mere letters. Kenorland is now a threat to the war and is both hated and fear by many nations. The Kenorland Imperial Family are the direct descendants of the Grand Imperial Dynasty.

7) After the world learnt of the Kenorland Imperial Family's background, they grew in fear that someone could be as powerful as the Grand Imperial Dynasty. People were not pleased with this and hated the fact that the Kenorland Imperial Family became the Grand Royal Family of Arikaisha. The country of Kenorland owns half of the world while the Grand Imperial Dynasty owns the rest. Making Kenorland only the second most powerful thing on the planet.

8) CUFF and EAON goal is to eradicate the Grand Imperial Dynasty along with the Kenorland Imperial Family but even they know how powerful both are.

9) Rosamaria and Demetrius are two childhood friends and distant cousins. They are both teenagers from imperial families and live lavish lifestyles. Rosamaria is the Princess of Kenorland while Demetrius is the Seventh Grand-Prince of Arikaisha. Rosamaria is currently studying abroad on another planet while Demetrius is in the military. They'll meet up again when the world enters it's second world war.

10) Twenty nations go into war with Kenorland. Kenorland uses the Grand Imperial Army to help them win the war. During that time the Empress of Kenorland was assassinated by a member of CUFF who used a GSM(God Slaying Machine). Rosamaria wants to stop the war and get help from Demetrius in ending it. But the Grand-Emperor is fond of war and bloodshed and the two will have a hard time ending the war. CUFF begins it's attack on the Grand Imperial Dynasty but fails.

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qualeshia3 wrote:

Let me know if a thread like this one exist or not.
Thanks a bunches.

Here is the breaking down of the plot to The Chronicles of Arikaisha. If you have any question, feel free to ask them as I will try my very best to answer them. If there are any changes I should make, let me know. Excuse my terrible grammar.

1) On January 5, 9001 NIRE(Neo Imperial Royal Era), Grand-Emperor Vincent was shot to death by a Promethean nationalist from Kenorland name Julliard Harken. During that year, the Kenorland Chancellor invaded the countries Borussia, Neo-Germania, Cimmeria, and Avantica then killed their leaders. The weapon that Julliard used to kill Grand-Emperor Vincent wasa GSM(God Slaying Machine). Vincent was presume dead after an hour of getting shot.

2) Also during the same year, the Prometheans were captured and placed in concentration camps. This started the Promethean Holocaust where twenty million Prometheans were place in gas chambers and forced to undergo torture methods.

3) Avantica and Breavaria gets into a war over who shall own the nation of Nuna. Kenorland intervenes and wins the war. This happens all in the same year of 9001.

4) In the year 9002 NIRE, the world enters it's first war and far more brutal than any war. Countries are fighting against each other along with having civil wars as well. Prometheans and Neo-Sapiens are fighting over rights that they feel they deserve. During the time of the war, Grand-Empress Griselda has been assassinated while on her goodwill tour to other planets. Noone knows who did it but she was likely poisoned around the end of her goodwill tour in Eathrion. Tension between Eathrion and Arikaisha are on high.

5)The world war ends in the year 9015 NIRE. The world is still in chaos over what happened. Neo-Sapiens and Prometheans still hates each other deeply along with the nations not getting along with each other. By the end of the year 9015 NIRE, two organizations name CUFF and EAON were born. EAON goal is to help poverty stricken nations get back on their feet while CUFF goal is to help commoners by getting rid of upper class citizens. CUFF and EAON team up and work together to end royalty and nobilty. So far they have already killed a few wealthy
people.

6) The world goes into chaos for at least three hundred years but there hasn't been any world wars. Kenorland has finally reach it's peak as the most powerful nation in the world. It has ownership of five nations known as Maria, Vince, Azaria, Cyril, and Solaria. These nations have been stripped of their names, right, culture, and tradition and became mere letters. Kenorland is now a threat to the war and is both hated and fear by many nations. The Kenorland Imperial Family are the direct descendants of the Grand Imperial Dynasty.

7) After the world learnt of the Kenorland Imperial Family's background, they grew in fear that someone could be as powerful as the Grand Imperial Dynasty. People were not pleased with this and hated the fact that the Kenorland Imperial Family became the Grand Royal Family of Arikaisha. The country of Kenorland owns half of the world while the Grand Imperial Dynasty owns the rest. Making Kenorland only the second most powerful thing on the planet.

8) CUFF and EAON goal is to eradicate the Grand Imperial Dynasty along with the Kenorland Imperial Family but even they know how powerful both are.

9) Rosamaria and Demetrius are two childhood friends and distant cousins. They are both teenagers from imperial families and live lavish lifestyles. Rosamaria is the Princess of Kenorland while Demetrius is the Seventh Grand-Prince of Arikaisha. Rosamaria is currently studying abroad on another planet while Demetrius is in the military. They'll meet up again when the world enters it's second world war.

10) Twenty nations go into war with Kenorland. Kenorland uses the Grand Imperial Army to help them win the war. During that time the Empress of Kenorland was assassinated by a member of CUFF who used a GSM(God Slaying Machine). Rosamaria wants to stop the war and get help from Demetrius in ending it. But the Grand-Emperor is fond of war and bloodshed and the two will have a hard time ending the war. CUFF begins it's attack on the Grand Imperial Dynasty but fails.

Enjoy!!!


First off, just need to say amazing job. Your breakdown tells the story in an absolutely perfect symmetry. I especially love how CUFF and EAON are pretty much played as dark Robin Hood groups walking that thin line. I've always loved characters/groups who were neither good nor evil but did what they did due to their beliefs of helping the common good despite the grayness of their deeds. I definitely love where you're going with this.
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