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EAON wants to own CUFF for they see them as tool in getting what they want which is to help the poor nations get rich. But CUFF doesn't know this.

Pretty much. The Grand-Emperor is also a coward too The GID plays a major role in the story.

I'm going to make another thread about the characters Rosamaria and Demetrius and their goals. Stick around for the next thread.



But EAON should know that siding with CUFF, even if to try and trick them, would potentially destroy the world economy (which wouldn't help the poor) and also be political suicide. It doesn't seem like a good idea.

Anyways, I look forwards to your next thread.
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qualeshia3 wrote:

EAON wants to own CUFF for they see them as tool in getting what they want which is to help the poor nations get rich. But CUFF doesn't know this.

Pretty much. The Grand-Emperor is also a coward too The GID plays a major role in the story.

I'm going to make another thread about the characters Rosamaria and Demetrius and their goals. Stick around for the next thread.



But EAON should know that siding with CUFF, even if to try and trick them, would potentially destroy the world economy (which wouldn't help the poor) and also be political suicide. It doesn't seem like a good idea.

Anyways, I look forwards to your next thread.


EAON plans on stopping CUFF before they get too ahead of themselves with their goal. Why hasn't EAON try to stop CUFF beforehand? Because EAON want to see how far CUFF will go with their goals. EAON knows it's a risk but they are willing to take it to achieve their goal.

I already have the next thread posted.

I tried really I did.
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Posted 7/23/16 , edited 7/23/16

qualeshia3 wrote:

Let me know if a thread like this one exist or not.
Thanks a bunches.


So, I decided to break the plot down the best way I could. If you have any questions about this plot, ask away. I will try my best to answer the questions. I welcome all feedback to my thread. Let me know if I need to make any corrections with it. Excuse my terrible grammar.

Here it is in spoiler:



Enjoy!!!



OK first off.. back story aside.

You simply want Rosamaria and Demetrius to end the war against Kenorland? Or take them out of power? But isn't CUFF and EAON already trying to do that, or are they just doing this for the sake of eliminating the grand imperial dynasty? Acting on taking from the rich, and giving to the poor scenario, unless these two characters somehow become a part of those groups.

Second, getting back to the back story. A nationalist from Kenorland killed the grand emperor with a GSM, and jumping forward the CUFF has now acquired the GSM. I am to believe this is the only reason that Kenorland got into power, with the GSM. So if this weapon is now freely in the hands of a group that acts on their own, what good is the GSM to Kenorland if the CUFF has no royalty, what good is the imperial army against the GSM for that matter?

Other than that. It seems to have a good idea behind it, but some clarification would be nice
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Yes, I want Rosamaria and Demetrius to stop Kenorland from destroying the world. CUFF and EAON just want to eliminate the Grand Imperial Dynasty which will throw the world into even more chaos.

I don't think Kenorland became powerful due to obtaining a GSM. They became powerful due to conquering other nations and being the direct descendants of the Grand Imperial Dynasty. The nationalist who got the GSM stole it from somewhere while CUFF purchase the GSM from a dealer. GSM are indestructible weapons created by the god-empress. The Kenorland Imperial Army can win against CUFF but they wouldn't need GSM because majority of CUFF members are Promethean. Their leader is a Neo-Sapien but no one in CUFF knows that.

I tried to answer the questions correctly but they were a bit difficult. Any more questions?
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Could you go into a little bit more how the GID bloodline helps people. I know that a while ago there was talk of superpowers, but I'm not sure if that plotline is still part of the story. If so, what superpowers do these people have? If not, why does bloodline matter?
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Could you go into a little bit more how the GID bloodline helps people. I know that a while ago there was talk of superpowers, but I'm not sure if that plotline is still part of the story. If so, what superpowers do these people have? If not, why does bloodline matter?


Neo-Sapiens have different superpowers that can range from psychic to elemental. Rosamaria has super strength and stamina and psychic powers.
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sundin13 wrote:

Could you go into a little bit more how the GID bloodline helps people. I know that a while ago there was talk of superpowers, but I'm not sure if that plotline is still part of the story. If so, what superpowers do these people have? If not, why does bloodline matter?


Neo-Sapiens have different superpowers that can range from psychic to elemental. Rosamaria has super strength and stamina and psychic powers.


What kind of psychic powers does she have?

What powers do the bad guys have?
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qualeshia3 wrote:


sundin13 wrote:

Could you go into a little bit more how the GID bloodline helps people. I know that a while ago there was talk of superpowers, but I'm not sure if that plotline is still part of the story. If so, what superpowers do these people have? If not, why does bloodline matter?


Neo-Sapiens have different superpowers that can range from psychic to elemental. Rosamaria has super strength and stamina and psychic powers.


What kind of psychic powers does she have?

What powers do the bad guys have?


Scrying, Telepathy, and Telekinesis


The bad guys have different types of powers. I'm not sure what power to give them though.
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Scrying, Telepathy, and Telekinesis


The bad guys have different types of powers. I'm not sure what power to give them though.

So she can tell the future, read people minds, and manipulate things with her mind. That seems kinda overpowered. It also means that she should know about pretty much every twist in the story before it actually happens. If you do stick with that, you need to give her powers weaknesses and limitations. So what are her weaknesses and limitations?
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Posted 7/23/16

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qualeshia3 wrote:


Scrying, Telepathy, and Telekinesis


The bad guys have different types of powers. I'm not sure what power to give them though.

So she can tell the future, read people minds, and manipulate things with her mind. That seems kinda overpowered. It also means that she should know about pretty much every twist in the story before it actually happens. If you do stick with that, you need to give her powers weaknesses and limitations. So what are her weaknesses and limitations?


I haven't thought about a weakness and limitations.
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Posted 7/23/16

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Yes, I want Rosamaria and Demetrius to stop Kenorland from destroying the world. CUFF and EAON just want to eliminate the Grand Imperial Dynasty which will throw the world into even more chaos.

I don't think Kenorland became powerful due to obtaining a GSM. They became powerful due to conquering other nations and being the direct descendants of the Grand Imperial Dynasty. The nationalist who got the GSM stole it from somewhere while CUFF purchase the GSM from a dealer. GSM are indestructible weapons created by the god-empress. The Kenorland Imperial Army can win against CUFF but they wouldn't need GSM because majority of CUFF members are Promethean. Their leader is a Neo-Sapien but no one in CUFF knows that.

I tried to answer the questions correctly but they were a bit difficult. Any more questions?


So Rosamaria is a Promethean? And Kenorland are Prometheans?

So to sum everything up with my understanding. The GSM is merely used against Neo sapiens, EAON and CUFF are just a group causing more harm then good by creating chaos and disorder against the imperial dynasty, and our two characters are caught in between a war of race and... fairness.
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Rosmaria is a Neo-Sapien. Kenorland is full of Neo-Sapiens AND Prometheans.


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