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Let me know if a thread like this one exist or not.
Thanks a bunches.


I've made a few changes to the story's plot. If you have any questions please ask me right away. I SWEAR THIS WILL BE THE LAST TIME I MAKE CHANGES BECAUSE I REALLY HAVE TO START CHAPTER ONE! I AM SO SORRY FOR DOING THIS!

Title
Crimson Crisis Massacre

Plot:
On January 15, 9059 NIRE, Grand-Emperor Hendricks was assassinated by a Kenorlandic spy name Julliard P Harken. During this time the Kenorlandic Chancellor Fredrick von Stroheim invaded the nation Borussia, Cimmeria, Avantica, and Neo-Germania and killed their leaders. He also started the Promethean Holocaust in which twenty million Prometheans were caught and tortured to death. Fredrick even conquered ten nations that he stripped away their names, cultures, traditions, and made them districts. With the help of Emperor Octavius, Fredrick was
able to do all these things in one year. But these actions led to the first world war. Enter Demetrius, a grand-prince who serves in the military. He pilots a mech name the Valkyrie and is currently fighting against Kenorland. But since Kenorland is such a super powerful country, it is proving to be difficult for any nation to fight. Demetrius plans on avenging his father's death and stopping such a powerful nation from destroying the world. Along the way he meets Rosamaria who is actually a Princess of Kenorland who left home to join the Grand Imperial Army. Rosamaria wants to stop her father from destroying the world. She tried everything she could to stop him but failed. Rosamaria decided that by joining the GIA(Grand Imperial Army) she'll have a chance in stopping her father from causing such mayhem. Enter the lives of Rosamaria and Demetrius as they try to stop the world war from destroying the world. Kenorland is a terrifying country and must be stopped before it is too late. Can Demetrius and Rosamaria stop the war and defeat Kenorland? What about the God Slaying Machines?


Enjoy!!!
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Could you explain the flow of the plot a little. What happens in the beginning of the book, what happens in the middle and what is the big climactic scene. You don't have to spoil the end if you don't want to, but I'd like to know a bit more about the plot.
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sundin13 wrote:

Could you explain the flow of the plot a little. What happens in the beginning of the book, what happens in the middle and what is the big climactic scene. You don't have to spoil the end if you don't want to, but I'd like to know a bit more about the plot.


You want me to explain the beginning, middle, and slight end to the plot or story?
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qualeshia3 wrote:


sundin13 wrote:

Could you explain the flow of the plot a little. What happens in the beginning of the book, what happens in the middle and what is the big climactic scene. You don't have to spoil the end if you don't want to, but I'd like to know a bit more about the plot.


You want me to explain the beginning, middle, and slight end to the plot or story?


Kinda. I just want to get a feel for what you are doing with the plot. I don't actually know anything about how you will be executing this story so I want to know a bit about the path you will take.
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sundin13 wrote:


qualeshia3 wrote:


sundin13 wrote:

Could you explain the flow of the plot a little. What happens in the beginning of the book, what happens in the middle and what is the big climactic scene. You don't have to spoil the end if you don't want to, but I'd like to know a bit more about the plot.


You want me to explain the beginning, middle, and slight end to the plot or story?


Kinda. I just want to get a feel for what you are doing with the plot. I don't actually know anything about how you will be executing this story so I want to know a bit about the path you will take.


To be honest, I'm not even sure what path I am going to follow with this story. I'm still trying to figure it out.


Did you see my other new thread?
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