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Posted 8/3/16
Let me know if a thread like this one exist or not.
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So, I have decided to direct my focus on writing a fictional biography about a fictional and immortal character. It's going to become a novel. I need help coming up with a title for the novel. Any advice. If you have any questions, feel free to ask me.

Here is the plot:

Title:
[Unknown at the moment]

Setting:
Axeasleka

POV:
[haven't decided yet]

Premise:
The story revolves around an immortal woman who faces many obstacles as she tries to lead an ordinary life.

Plot:
Avangelina wasn't always immortal for she was born a Promethean. Her life changed at the age twelve when she was dying from a fatal illness. The cure save her life but accidentally turned her into an immortal being. Ever since then Avangelina has been living an immortal life going through many ups and downs. She is known as the Immortal Princess and is feared, hated, and even respected by many people. Avangelina tries to live a normal life but she must accept the fact that she can't die no matter what. She lives up to the year 9000 and beyond that. In the year 9989, she finally gotten her wish and was able to die by assassination. She was the Grand-Empress during the time of her assassination. This is a story about the long life of an immortal woman who faced many odd as she tries to live a normal life. Avangelina was born in the year 1905 then died in the year 9989. After gaining and losing so many people in her life, she tries to move on accept that she can do nothing. Avangelina has live through all and seen all as an immortal woman. She even started a revolution that changed the world.

Enjoy!!!
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Posted 8/4/16
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You should make the entire novel about how it ended. How did the assassin kill the Immortal Princess? What events led up to that? Who is this assassin guy? Was it for love? Was it fate? Was someone else affected by this cure? Were there others? Was this a plot?
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Posted 8/4/16

drozy wrote:




You should make the entire novel about how it ended. How did the assassin kill the Immortal Princess? What events led up to that? Who is this assassin guy? Was it for love? Was it fate? Was someone else affected by this cure? Were there others? Was this a plot?


I want to make the novel about her life and how her life was ended. The assassin murdered her with a God Slaying Machine. Some people feared having an immortal ruler and the assassin was one of those people. The assassin was just a regular guy. There were a few people affected by the cure.
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Just saying, but Mark Twain's autobiography is about 2500 pages and he lived for 74 years. How are you going to condense 8000 years of life and history into something that is even remotely reasonably long? Also, think about where we were as a civilization 8000 years ago. How are you going to handle 8000 years worth of technological advancements, advancements in civilization, politics, social norms, etc?
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sundin13 wrote:

Just saying, but Mark Twain's autobiography is about 2500 pages and he lived for 74 years. How are you going to condense 8000 years of life and history into something that is even remotely reasonably long? Also, think about where we were as a civilization 8000 years ago. How are you going to handle 8000 years worth of technological advancements, advancements in civilization, politics, social norms, etc?


Excuse me while I make a lot of changes.
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