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Let me know if a thread like this one exist or not.
Thanks a bunches.

I wrote a completely new novel plot and want you to ask me any question pertaining to the plot.

Here I go.

Title: The Rebirth Of Avangelina Starbrooke

Setting: Axeasleka

POV: First-Person

Premise: A girl with a tremendous power endure plenty obstacles as she comes back to life.

Plot: Avangelina is a grand-princess who's life changes after waking from a seven month coma. She received a power that enables her to come back to life two hours after being completely dead. Ever since then she has had a series of bad luck that led her to being injured or dead. Avangelina must find the person who gave her the power and made her life this way. But can Avangelina stop dying long enough to find the person?

Let me know what you think.

Enjoy!!!!
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Sounds okay tbh.
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I don't have any issues with that premise. Like always though, I'd need to know more about the plot before I said anything more concrete.

I guess I'll ask, how does she know that someone gave her the power and why does it matter if she finds that person?
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sundin13 wrote:

I don't have any issues with that premise. Like always though, I'd need to know more about the plot before I said anything more concrete.

I guess I'll ask, how does she know that someone gave her the power and why does it matter if she finds that person?


She met the person who gave her the power in a dream she had while in a coma.
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Jophar_Vorin wrote:

Sounds okay tbh.


Thanks.
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qualeshia3 wrote:

She met the person who gave her the power in a dream she had while in a coma.


So what does she think she will get out of meeting this person?
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sundin13 wrote:


qualeshia3 wrote:

She met the person who gave her the power in a dream she had while in a coma.


So what does she think she will get out of meeting this person?


Hopefully the chance to get rid of the power.
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qualeshia3 wrote:

Hopefully the chance to get rid of the power.


So, she wants to die? Why?
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sundin13 wrote:


qualeshia3 wrote:

Hopefully the chance to get rid of the power.


So, she wants to die? Why?


She doesn't want to die, she just wants a normal life that isn't full of bad luck. She wants to live.
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qualeshia3 wrote:


sundin13 wrote:


qualeshia3 wrote:

Hopefully the chance to get rid of the power.


So, she wants to die? Why?


She doesn't want to die, she just wants a normal life that isn't full of bad luck. She wants to live.


Her power is "coming back two hours after dying"... Why would she assume that getting rid of that power will help her live? Its entirely possible that she would get rid of the power and die the next day.
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sundin13 wrote:


qualeshia3 wrote:


sundin13 wrote:


qualeshia3 wrote:

Hopefully the chance to get rid of the power.


So, she wants to die? Why?


She doesn't want to die, she just wants a normal life that isn't full of bad luck. She wants to live.


Her power is "coming back two hours after dying"... Why would she assume that getting rid of that power will help her live? Its entirely possible that she would get rid of the power and die the next day.


Even if that is the possibly, she still want to try and get rid of power.

Also have you checked out the next thread?
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qualeshia3 wrote:

Even if that is the possibly, she still want to try and get rid of power.

Also have you checked out the next thread?


I still think that its a bit of a flimsy motivation. "I want to get rid of my immortality because I don't want to die," just feels really weird. Also, how does she know that the bad luck she has been having has anything to do with her power?

I'll check out the other thread in a bit.
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qualeshia3 wrote:

Even if that is the possibly, she still want to try and get rid of power.

Also have you checked out the next thread?


I still think that its a bit of a flimsy motivation. "I want to get rid of my immortality because I don't want to die," just feels really weird. Also, how does she know that the bad luck she has been having has anything to do with her power?

I'll check out the other thread in a bit.


Ever since the coma she had a series of bad luck that couldn't be explained. Avangelina mainly just wants the bad luck to end and have a normal life along with the constant dying. Avangelina wants to die but from a really old age. Having to die young constantly then two hours later comes back to life, is exhausting to her.
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