Old story to a new novel
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Posted 8/6/16 , edited 8/7/16
So, I found an old story that I plan on working into one of the new novels that I am working on. Tell me what you think. I'm going to make changes to it so it can work better to the new novel. Lend me your feedback and questions.

Here I go:




Enjoy!!!
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Posted 8/6/16 , edited 8/7/16
I welcome all feedback.
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Needs more Spider-Man
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Posted 8/14/16 , edited 8/14/16
It is really interesting so far - I hope that you do make it a novel, it is something I would enjoy reading

The only problem I find is that some sentences are worded a bit funny and there seems to be a few errors, but I figure this is just a draft and the overall result will be a bit different & proofread or whatever. Aha

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