I made a rap song
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Posted 8/30/16 , edited 8/30/16
Reupload because one word was off beat and it was bothering me. lol.

https://youtu.be/gF00O2NwGOM

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I feel like your tone of voice is improving but your lyrics and flow are still seriously holding you back.
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Posted 8/30/16 , edited 8/30/16

sundin13 wrote:

I feel like your tone of voice is improving but your lyrics and flow are still seriously holding you back.


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