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Posted 2/12/08
Sea of Dreams

Within the Sea of Dreams,
Which resides within our minds,
Swims a many an image,
Of several diffrent kinds.

Some are generous,
Jolly and joyfull.
Others are madly,
melancholy and mournful.

Some are green,
With love and life.
Others are gray,
With peril and strife.

Where they come from,
No one knows.
They are a dangerous beauty,
Like a midsummer rose.

Imagination is the Sea of Dreams,
Which resides within our minds,
Swimming with many an image,
Of sever different kinds.
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Posted 2/12/08
very expedient you did good
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Posted 2/13/08
Aww thanks.
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Posted 2/16/08
I like this poem... so much imagery comes to mind when I read this. I enjoy it a lot. It is like you are seeing the world in a way no one else has seen it. You have the makings of a great poet. If I may though, tell you of a spelling error. "joyfull" should be "joyful"
-thats all but I loved it
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