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Posted 11/26/06 , edited 11/26/06
*read it slowly and almost to yourself*
Title: "Black Widow Loving"

Light breath on my neck
whisperlegs crawling into my ear
Burrowing words
make my flesh bitter
she said "goodbye"
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Posted 11/26/06
Giggle, man it's easy to come up with bad poetry. Here goes:

Time like a razor splits my mind
like a zephyr of fire lust peels
from my mind
'take a thousand sins
'take a thousand pardons
and still I stand, before the world
Naked. a cloak of my lies
to protect me from the gale of
your truth.
Beyond me, beyond you, is nothing
so nothing, we shall be, forever
forever, you and me.
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Daaaaaaaaaaamn. That was touching.

Half the crap in my Literature textbooks wasn't as visual as that.

I wish Kurt Cobain could make that into a song.

You're going on my buddy list for that.
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Heh, thanks but it really is pretty poor, just a meaningless string of vaguely sonerous sounding words, without metre', pace or structure I spent 3 years as a goth (I grew out of it) so it kinda comes naturally..

Give me any topic and I can wax lyrical for hours.
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"Mother / Mommy please"

Sticks and stones can break my bones,
but my her words kill my soul.

What do your have to say about your mom?
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Posted 11/26/06
Fweh. I meant my own 'poetry' my friend
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Im bored lets do another.

Like twilight your breath
reaches me as I sleep,
before the arrows of
my self doubt penetrate my mind-built
walls of reservation
to me you come, the dischordant
crash of your presence reaching sleep bound eyes
it jarrs me
it fills me
with lust I cannot consumate
my night lady, on the eve you fly
on my sleeping mind do you impose
your power.
I cannot turn away
it fills me
it fills me with all I can want
yet can never possess
for dawn steals you
mornings rapturous grasp
tears you from me
and I wake
I wake to none
and weep to the rising sun.
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^What is your avatar from? I'm thinking it's that little bitch from Lazytown .... but I've only seen one clip from that show (the You are a pirate song).

OFFTOPIC!
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You nailed it my friend ;)

If you really like I can spam you with countless eurobeat type songs featuring her ...

I had a ...'thing' a month back where i couldnt stop listening to em.
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Posted 11/26/06

cocky wrote:

Im bored lets do another.

Like twilight your breath
reaches me as I sleep
before the arrows of
my self doubt penetrate my mind-built
walls of reservation
to me you come, the dischordant
crash of your presence reaching sleep bound eyes
it jarrs me
it fills me
with lust I cannot consumate
my night lady, on the eve you fly
on my sleeping mind do you impose
your power.
I cannot turn away
it fills me
it fills me with all I can want
yet can never possess
for dawn steals you
mornings rapturous grasp
tears you from me
and I wake
I wake to none
and weep to the rising sun.


^That's why I never want to wake in the morning.
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I came up with this one a long time ago, put a sleazy accent on the 'words'.

"Pockets of Rockets,Rockets In Pockets"

Tall, dark, 'handsome' rockets
Aimed for the sky
'Cum' countdown
Motherlands will be, driven 'wild'

Long, erect, 'firebird' rockets
Aimed for 'pene'trations
Tension, 'throbbing', 'bucking'
'Splitting', the Nations

Orgasmic-hot,rock-'hard' rockets
Fuming,caressing, 'no' Love of Humanity
Borders Conceived, blurring now
Leaving only the Child, Our Vanity

I need a better title.
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Posted 11/26/06
Not one for subtlety eh my friend :)

shall I do another? Gimme a topic.
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Posted 11/26/06
you don't know stephanie?

why thats as common knowledge, as say, baking a cake...
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Posted 11/26/06
One could even say it's a piece of cake...
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Posted 11/26/06
huh?
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wha wha what?!
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