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Posted 10/18/16 , edited 10/18/16
“In the name of all that is right, surrender yourself, unholy one!”

Name: Kiyoko ( 聖子 ) Haraldr

Age: 19

Gender: female

Race: human

Identity: Antimagic Association

Power: None

Weapon: crossbow, shoulder-mounted cannon, ritual knives

Personality: Very rooted in prejudice, and untrusting of all magic users and demons.

Relations: works for Yatsuhiro Sawamura

Bio: Kiyoko was raised in a small mountain village where everyone fell in line to the beliefs that the antimagic association advocated for. One day when Kiyoko was 6, an innocent mage wandered to the village. They had been prosecuted by the antimagic association, and were hiding in the mountains when they saw an unsuspecting village. At first Kiyoko (along with everyone else) trusted the mysterious traveler. They were welcomed to stay at Kiyoko’s house even. Later that night, the mage attempted to help cook dinner by instantly boiling water. Kiyoko immediately took a knife and stabbed the innocent traveler, as she had been taught that all forms of “magic” were ultimately dark, evil unnatural things.
The Antimagic Association heard of this when they looked into the mage’s whereabouts, and were pleased with the girl who reacted so quickly to an unholy mage in her presence. The Antimagic Association took Kiyoko from her village and trained her to be a fighter for the Association.

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Posted 10/18/16
Jackson, yo need a different power. Ryan has fire.
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Posted 10/18/16
It looks good alex, but I can't approve it, hit quote on her character, control + a, then hit spoiler and write feedback or approved.
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Posted 10/18/16 , edited 10/18/16


Fam I got pyrokinesis, come up with other power.
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Posted 10/18/16
like so
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Posted 10/18/16

-Second- wrote:



Fam I got pyrokinesis, come up with other power.


bruh, it says "Psychokinesis"
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Posted 10/18/16






Approved
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Posted 10/18/16
I'm to lazy to do this again so I'll just say I approved my characters
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Posted 10/18/16
changed to electricity instead
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Swords don't have powers, change psychokinesis, "He burned a village of imps to a crisp" besides the fact that imps are immune to fire, and you have electric powers, this would be seen as normal since imps are a lower species so they can be killed (especially by demons) without consequences. Also demons cannon be "electric" simply demon works.
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Posted 10/18/16
Yeah but he didn't explain that in descrition, if you read it, no mention of psychokinesis, instead he BURNed down a village.
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Posted 10/18/16
Alex do you want to lose a job?
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dude, you get burnt when you're struck by lighting or electricity, also imps, bad choice on my part
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Ah fine, I'll do it when I have my computer
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