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I'm just a newbie in this forum, ehehehe....
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Posted 12/10/16 , edited 12/10/16

AnimeFanNotAnOtaku wrote:

I'm just a newbie in this forum, ehehehe....


Thats ok. Just read the OP and comment on the posts above yours.
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Doesn't seem that original, but i'll give it a 6/10

Character name: Camellia Santana

Age: 24

Strength: Polylingual, able to speak Portuguese, English, Spanish, French, Hindi, and Mandarin. She's also a great boxer.

Weakness: Many allergies, including mint, bees, and citrus fruits

Occupation: Singer and boxer

Fun fact: Camellia has many birds, including Sun Conures!








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Oh good someone brought this thread back now I don't have to be the one who did that. Now I need to prepare my last few characters for this....
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official-shinsengumi wrote:

@melancholy

Doesn't seem that original, but i'll give it a 6/10

Character name: Camellia Santana

Age: 24

Strength: Polylingual, able to speak Portuguese, English, Spanish, French, Hindi, and Mandarin. She's also a great boxer.

Weakness: Many allergies, including mint, bees, and citrus fruits

Occupation: Singer and boxer

Fun fact: Camellia has many birds, including Sun Conures!






That bird is cute.
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Posted 12/16/16 , edited 12/16/16
Rating that 10/10.

Character name: Princess Rosanna Anna Marie Ellise Con'telle Ellensdaughter of the Aerthen kingdom.
Age: 19
Streingth: animal shape-shifting, power over earth, friend of beasts, sees spirits, archery and swordsmanship (archery is the stronger of the two), strong willed and enduring (seeing that her entire family was slaughtered and her kingdom was destroyed...I would hope she'd be strong willed...), good at making friends...
Weakness: too trusting...also, she had a terrible fear of heights.
Occupation: revoutionist/hero of the people
Fun fact: has a pet unicorn, and lived in the forest for 15 years of her life...
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WolfeQueene wrote:

Rating that 10/10.

Character name: Princess Rosanna Anna Marie Ellise Con'telle Ellensdaughter of the Aerthen kingdom.
Age: 19
Streingth: animal shape-shifting, power over earth, friend of beasts, sees spirits, archery and swordsmanship (archery is the stronger of the two), strong willed and enduring (seeing that her entire family was slaughtered and her kingdom was destroyed...I would hope she'd be strong willed...), good at making friends...
Weakness: too trusting...also, she had a terrible fear of heights.
Occupation: revoutionist/hero of the people
Fun fact: has a pet unicorn, and lived in the forest for 15 years of her life...


That is a long name.
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Posted 12/16/16

qualeshia3 wrote:


WolfeQueene wrote:

Rating that 10/10.

Character name: Princess Rosanna Anna Marie Ellise Con'telle Ellensdaughter of the Aerthen kingdom.
Age: 19
Streingth: animal shape-shifting, power over earth, friend of beasts, sees spirits, archery and swordsmanship (archery is the stronger of the two), strong willed and enduring (seeing that her entire family was slaughtered and her kingdom was destroyed...I would hope she'd be strong willed...), good at making friends...
Weakness: too trusting...also, she had a terrible fear of heights.
Occupation: revoutionist/hero of the people
Fun fact: has a pet unicorn, and lived in the forest for 15 years of her life...


That is a long name.


She's a princess...what do you expect?
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WolfeQueene wrote:

She's a princess...what do you expect?


Reminds me of the royalty and nobility in my stories. I choose long names for them as well.
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Posted 12/16/16

qualeshia3 wrote:


WolfeQueene wrote:

She's a princess...what do you expect?


Reminds me of the royalty and nobility in my stories. I choose long names for them as well.


As it should be...
(Her friends call her Rose)
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Posted 12/19/16 , edited 12/24/16
Meh. I feel like the character was sort of under-explained if I'm gonna be honest. I think you should consider going into more detail (although you could definitely make the argument that I'm just as bad, just at the other extreme, as you will probably soon see)

Name: King Magnolus of Karolin

Age: 72

Strengths: The land of Taurialba is one of constant war between its many nations. For generations, each has pushed itself for little more than military prowess to subjugate the entire continent, and decades ago, the Kingdom of Karolin nearly did. When King Magnolus was young his country's incredible military and resources along with his outstanding power and knowledge allowed him to take over other countries at an alarming rate. Unlike his neighbours however, his campaign was motivated by peace. Magnolus wished to put an end to the constant wars and, as a young ruler, set out to do so by uniting the land under his peaceful monarchy. At first it seemed to be going well, but the army of Karolin would find itself defeated before it could annex all the kingdoms. This defeat gave King Magnolus a serious injury he was never quite able to fully recover from, permanently weakening his tremendous power, and returned the conquered lands to their previous warlords. With both his body and his Kingdom weakened, King Magnolus had no choice but to retreat to his mountainous country (the land that had belonged to Karolin before the subjugation of other Kingdoms) where he would grow old caring for his people. He still firmly believed in peace but he was no longer willing to go to war for it and decided he would practice peaceful ways by focusing his efforts on being as fair, just and merciful a King as he could be. This made him into an extremely kindhearted man, empathetic to a fault and supportive towards all people. He's the kind of person who always puts the needs of others before his own, and his kingdom is incredibly loyal to him for that. He has a strong moral compass and a stronger desire to protect those in danger, allowing Praevar and his group to stay in his Kingdom when they are being hunted down by the surrounding kingdoms. He formed a close bond with Praevar, seeing a bit of his younger self in him. He cautioned Praevar not to make the same mistakes as he did, urging him to spread peace through philosophy, which he recognized the former's talent for, instead of war. Praevar unfortunately failed to be convinced as he had seen to many injustices and atrocities to take lying down, but he promised Magnolus that once he ruled the land the two would spread and maintain peace together. His strength in battle, while no longer at its peak, is still beyond comparison. Legends are passed around about his giant war hammer, calling it an omen of destruction and devastation and for good reason, as Magnolus can use it to bring inestimably high body counts to any army that would dare to attack his kingdom. It isn't his only tool for this, however, as he also possesses strength in magic, which he usually uses to conjure the Holy Merovin Shield. This ancient spell, secretly passed down through the royal Karolin line of succession, allows the caster to create a barrier of white magic that, though breakable with sufficient force, is impenetrable. Its size is directly proportionate to the amount of magic power the user puts into it, so it can range from the size of a normal shield to big enough to protect an entire city depending on how much Magnolus wishes to exert himself. He has a couple other magic abilities, but this is the only one he uses regularly. He also is very talented at bird training, his primary hobby outside of being a king, and has a remarkable ability to hold his liquor (an ability he uses very frequently)

Weaknesses: As earlier stated, Magnolus is empathetic to a fault. His country rests on the most tactically advantageous land in all of Taurialba but he nonetheless brings people into it willingly when he feels they need protection. This is probably not a good idea, seeing as the main thing keeping foreign armies from all out attacks on Karolin is the army's reputation of obscene numbers and strength that was built up during Magnolus' campaign against the other countries. In reality, Magnolus had drastically reduced the number of soldiers once his war effort failed as it was now a purely defensive group. If the truth got out, Karolin would promptly undergo attacks from several different surrounding countries and would most likely be taken over. In combat, his biggest weakness is easily his slow speed. His arsenal of heavy armour and his massive war hammer make his movements plodding and sluggish. Being huge and slow makes him a very easy target for enemy warriors, especially archers, magi and assasins, but this does not bother him at all because having all the enemies focus on him means they won't be attacking his troops and citizens and while he can usually take them on, he is liable to getting into serious trouble when enemy numbers are big. He also refuses to act his age, going straight to the front lines in a battle and drinking copious amounts of alcohol (thankfully not at the same time) ignoring the fact that his aging body won't always be able to endure.

Occupation: King, Paladin

Fun fact: His favourite food is roast, right off the spit.


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I want to read this. But it feels like it's too much for me.
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Posted 12/24/16

qualeshia3 wrote:




I want to read this. But it feels like it's too much for me.


Too much for you? What, like too many words or something?
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Posted 12/24/16
10/10 Very good and really long.


Name: Frangelica Timberhawk

Age: 17

Strengths: Frangelica is a hardworking woman who is dedicated to getting back what belongs to her. To be honest she does care about people. She is headstrong, assertive, and very independent. Frangelica loves her siblings and adoptive family very much. She was shocked to learn the truth about her past and is determined to get back everything that was taken from her.

Weakness: She is very rude, blunt, sarcastic, stoic, and serious. To many people it seems like she does not care about them or anything. Frangelica is often too dedicated that she loses sight of what is important. She has a deep hatred for Neo-Sapiens for some traumatic event that happened in her past. Living on the moon has made her a much colder person who very determined to seek revenge. She is a little arrogant.

Occupation; Royal House Clanswoman/Princess

Fun Fact: Frangelica is a vegan who LOVES sweets.
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Too much for you? What, like too many words or something?



Too many words. Sorry.
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