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Emo Poetry
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Posted 2/13/08 , edited 2/13/08
This stuff is so gay. Here's an example.
Its by vet cr user sageblast95:

The pains of life
I’m Wide awake and missing you
Hands clutched
Thoughts rushed
I get up
Soundless
Thoughtless
Off the bed and across the floor
Out the window
All around thoughts of you enveloping my mind
It’s a blur
Words are only slurs
Told I am alive
Feels as if it is full of lies
I see you suddenly
I wake up close
My day brightening up
With the sun rising and yet there are stars
Then suddenly in a blink of an eye
Rushed
Hushed
You sadly die
The sun falls
The stars implode
Buildings fall and traffic slows
My heart, it rolls and my love say hello
But what she means is the final good-bye
For the very last time
I’ll always be alone
Crying
Dieing
Sprawled up next to the shore
The seas of black
But the skies of white
The world in no more to me
For all I can see is the black and white of an olden picture frame
Falling
Bawling
Now I refuse to keep calling Your name
I finally realize that I must go on
I climb
I crawl
Up the ladder, through the door
Back up to the my favorite world
With skies of blue
The skies that were renewed
With broken plates
And flavored dates
I’m back to the world that is shallow
As I remember my life was never truly hallow
To live is the same as to forget
Because we must always let
The pains of life
Go forever alone


Its so beautiful isn't it! Amazing work from a twelve year old azn boy!
Posted 2/13/08
gah emo poems lol, emos are already depressing enough

lol i bet someone is going to come here and say "there is an emo thread" and "there is a poem thread"

lol but u combined the 2 so i dont even know if it counts

and for the topic, i like the emo song btw
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Posted 2/13/08
I will keep the thread alive im a mod
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Posted 2/13/08
http://www.emo-corner.com/forums

Plenty of emo poems there.



Goodie song:
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Posted 2/13/08

Nayru wrote:

I will keep the thread alive im a mod


in personating a mod? thats an all time low! the words is part of ur pic. seeing how ur not listed in the staff. and they werent making new mods and this would be short notice.
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welook wrote:


Nayru wrote:

I will keep the thread alive im a mod


in personating a mod? thats an all time low! the words is part of ur pic. seeing how ur not listed in the staff. and they werent making new mods and this would be short notice.


Shh! No one was supposed to notice!
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in personating? yeav ive been inside personating before. great place
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w-o-w
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hmmm....that's kinda sad...i mean, i have seen greatest,but this was pretty cool though.
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Posted 2/13/08
From the Emo Corner forum:


I am like the deceased, alone and forgotten, and yet, I am
not dead. Just like shadows and dust, I am not seen, and
yet I am not invisable. In this thing called life, I
wander the land seeking out my own happiness. Everywhere I
turn though, all I find is hurt and dispare. Reasons are
seeked out in order to find why it always happens, but are
never found. The cursed one I am, and for what reason? I
never asked for this. I am this era's Frankenstien,
unwanted, undesired and unloved. I am their amusement for
them to outcast and ostersize.
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Posted 2/13/08
Ugh you never see any poetry by teenagers and adolescents other than "boo hoo" poems after getting dumped or rejected.
Posted 2/13/08
feel
better,
if you ever
feel alone
just message
me.

aww
:[
dont be sad..
and that was great
by the way..
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31 / F / Canada
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Posted 2/13/08
I actually like these types of poems.
Gets you thinking about what other people have on their mind.
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Posted 2/13/08
sad
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Posted 2/13/08
bald bald bald bald bald bald
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