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Posted 2/13/08 , edited 2/24/08

Tsukasa leaves for France and says goodbye to Junpei. Junpei is sad that Tsukasa is leaving- he'd rather not have her go but their separation was inevitable from the start. Before going, Tsukasa tells Junpei not to keep her waiting any more because she has waited all this time. She does not mention any names but the implication is clear. As she leaves Junpei, Tsukasa does not turn around. He eventually finds his way back to his highschool's rooftop. The sun was a now setting, lighting up the clouds in a brilliant explosion of red and orange hues.

"That's right," he muses, "it all started on a day like this."

He thinks about everything that happened to him since that fateful day when a beautiful girl with strawberry panties dropped in on him unexpectedly. Suddenly, Junpei is startled to be embraced from behind. For a few moments nothing is said. Junpei becomes aware of the person's heartbeat against his back. Then, he hears a soft, familiar voice.

"Junpei, I. . . ".

He hears her voice break and feels his heart breaking along with it. His thoughts turn to Tsukasa's final words to him. He feels the person behind him start to pull back but before she can, he reaches out and catches her. Startled, she tries to stammer an excuse as she starts to look away. Junpei gently cups her face and turns her to face him. He looks down and sees tears start to well up in her eyes. To his amazement, Junpei wonders why does he feel so. . . . alive?

"Why are you trembling, Aya?" Junpei asks in a soft, whispering voice. He wonders whether Aya can feel his own heart racing wildy.

Aya tries to get herself under control. Her heart was beating so hard that she felt she was going to faint from the rush of blood. She HAS to tell him, she thinks to herself, as she struggles to finally say the words that have been in her heart since middleschool. Stammering, she pressed on.

"Junpei, I- I know this is a difficult time for you but I have to tell you something. I- I've always. . . ."

But before she could finish, Junpei gently lays a finger on her lips. He finally understood. All these years, and now he finally understood. Without thinking about it, the words found Junpei.

"I know," he said gently.

Junpei didn't know when he started crying but Aya was suddenly wiping tears from his face. Such warm hands, Junpei thought, really make me feel cared for. It was probably due to their mutual tear-wiping that they found themselves sharing their first real kiss. Neither Junpei nor Aya knew how long it lasted but both wished they could bottle that feeling forever.

Looking at Aya in his arms, she was smiling and crying at the same time. Junpei had never seen her look as beautiful as she did now. Nuzzling her forehead and before being lost in an embrace, Junpei finally managed to tell Aya what she had been waiting to hear from him for all these years.

"I know, Aya. I love you too."

FIN

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I would like to hear your opinion about it so pls. comment..

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i hope this was the ending!!!.. hhmmmnnn??.. i really wish them to be together!!.. ahuhuhu!!.. soo sad.. manaka didn't chose any of the girls in the manga.. he must've chose toujou!!.. for he was her first real LOVE!!..=(
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^ he did.. in the epilogue, he chose Tsukasa
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Posted 4/9/08
yes~ Nishino is the mate >.<~
at the some place..as usual, Manaka with his camera, shoting some scene~
suddenly he shocked that found Nishino is that scene~
They hugging and.........
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http://www.mediafire.com/?o9xod4i3dyi

just found on the internet ~ just sharing..

As you can see, since this is a fan made, most(i mean all) of the pictures came from the manga.

well, its better than nothing
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cool... i kind of like the ending... i like gentle girls more than outgoing girls.. Doesn't manaka realise that he alone made aya's life a billion times more interesting?? and it is also aya that made manaka's life full of girls, therefore why can't the author draw them to be together??
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Posted 6/24/08
i didnt like it that much.. heheh
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if we are talking about the original ending, it sucks.. toujou aya would be a better ending rather than nishino. nishino should stay in france and listen to old grandma's words: marry higure.

I support any ending with toujou as the one chosen lol... even i myself is writing my own version..
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i really hope mizuki would create an ichigo 100% parody... with Aya... i love this ending!
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chaptehking wrote:

if we are talking about the original ending, it sucks.. toujou aya would be a better ending rather than nishino. nishino should stay in france and listen to old grandma's words: marry higure.

I support any ending with toujou as the one chosen lol... even i myself is writing my own version..


dude, through the story, it was actually a pretty obvious situation that aya would ended up with junpei, i dunno how on earth when chapter 120+ the story changed... i think mizuki got extorted to change the ending -_-
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Tsukasa leaves for France and says goodbye to Junpei. Junpei is sad that Tsukasa is leaving- he'd rather not have her go but their separation was inevitable from the start. Before going, Tsukasa tells Junpei not to keep her waiting any more because she has waited all this time. She does not mention any names but the implication is clear. As she leaves Junpei, Tsukasa does not turn around. He eventually finds his way back to his highschool's rooftop. The sun was a now setting, lighting up the clouds in a brilliant explosion of red and orange hues.

"That's right," he muses, "it all started on a day like this."

He thinks about everything that happened to him since that fateful day when a beautiful girl with strawberry panties dropped in on him unexpectedly. Suddenly, Junpei is startled to be embraced from behind. For a few moments nothing is said. Junpei becomes aware of the person's heartbeat against his back. Then, he hears a soft, familiar voice.

"Junpei, I. . . ".

He hears her voice break and feels his heart breaking along with it. His thoughts turn to Tsukasa's final words to him. He feels the person behind him start to pull back but before she can, he reaches out and catches her. Startled, she tries to stammer an excuse as she starts to look away. Junpei gently cups her face and turns her to face him. He looks down and sees tears start to well up in her eyes. To his amazement, Junpei wonders why does he feel so. . . . alive?

"Why are you trembling, Aya?" Junpei asks in a soft, whispering voice. He wonders whether Aya can feel his own heart racing wildy.

Aya tries to get herself under control. Her heart was beating so hard that she felt she was going to faint from the rush of blood. She HAS to tell him, she thinks to herself, as she struggles to finally say the words that have been in her heart since middleschool. Stammering, she pressed on.

"Junpei, I- I know this is a difficult time for you but I have to tell you something. I- I've always. . . ."

But before she could finish, Junpei gently lays a finger on her lips. He finally understood. All these years, and now he finally understood. Without thinking about it, the words found Junpei.

"I know," he said gently.

Junpei didn't know when he started crying but Aya was suddenly wiping tears from his face. Such warm hands, Junpei thought, really make me feel cared for. It was probably due to their mutual tear-wiping that they found themselves sharing their first real kiss. Neither Junpei nor Aya knew how long it lasted but both wished they could bottle that feeling forever.

Looking at Aya in his arms, she was smiling and crying at the same time. Junpei had never seen her look as beautiful as she did now. Nuzzling her forehead and before being lost in an embrace, Junpei finally managed to tell Aya what she had been waiting to hear from him for all these years.

"I know, Aya. I love you too."

FIN

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I would like to hear your opinion about it so pls. comment..




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Posted 7/3/08
i like the ending of this sequel, however, it lacks some romantic sense.. what i have included in my own version is that i wrote that 1 yr after manaka worked in the construction site he is still unable to forget toujou, even though he is supposed to be with nishino.. unable to resist his gut feelings, he decided to meet up with toujou (studying in university that time) to confess his true feelings.. then they meet up at the izumisaka high's rooftop and the whole aya-dropping-down-the-roof affair happens.. then i somehow stuck there don't know how to make a romantic ending with toujou being chosen...
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Posted 7/11/08
hey chaptehking i'll help you if you don't mind.. how about it?
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the ending must be toujou!! something weird about this comic.. anyone feel the same with me?
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