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Posted 7/15/08 , edited 7/15/08
I dont know WHY in the bloody hell the actual writer did not make Manaka end up with Toujou, it kind of destroyed the whole purpose of the manga which was Manaka and Toujou being together and making movies. Such a great enjoyable manga was destroyed by such a crappy ending, I can't express how pissed off I am after reading the ending . I am very sure that the manga's rating would be way higher if Toujou and Manaka ended up together. At least to me, the ending of a manga/anime is one of the most inportant features of it because that is what you reflect upon in the future and think, "oh yea, I remember reading the manga Ichigo 100% and it had a great ending where the protagonist ended up with the first person who he truely loved, I would like to review the manga again, especially the ending". But now, whenever you will get a reference of Ichigo 100%, you will be like, "Oh great, its the crappy manga which had a totally unorthodox ending which made no sense and pissed me off so badly, I hope I never ever see anything to do with that manga again". Also because of this, any new work the writer might make may not get as much audience because of the crappy ending of her previous work.

Well, as for you Death_Sythe08, its great to see an alternate ending which should have been. This helped me calm down a bit and I think its a decent ending you made there. Heck, I might even work on my own ending of this manga but anyway, thats beside the point, I am glad I read this ending, i just wish there would have been an ending like this in the manga.
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hey hey hey!!... im a guy.. but man u sure do have a talent... u wrote all of that?? that's pretty kool man... yeah but i think your ending was pretty good too... although the real ending disappointed me -.-... but Rayaa's ending wasn't all that bad either... anyone's ending is good i guess... the best part in the whole 19 volumes... was the Whole Nineteen Volumes itself!!...
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Posted 7/25/08
hmm.... i m kind of disappointed with the original ending... tis ending wasn't so bad, but it just seem not gd enough... your ending cannot portray the feelings that i hope that i can feel....
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chaptehking wrote:

hmm.... i m kind of disappointed with the original ending... tis ending wasn't so bad, but it just seem not gd enough... your ending cannot portray the feelings that i hope that i can feel....


this IS not my work.. I am trying to write my own fanfic for the ending, but I seem to lack inspiration, so I am currently rereading the whole manga..
i think it won't be up anytime soon cuz I'm pretty busy with studying and such,..
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Posted 8/16/08
Wiz... I Full-Heartedly Felt The Same With You... After all toujo aya is his first love...!
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Posted 11/22/08

death_sythe08 wrote:


Tsukasa leaves for France and says goodbye to Junpei. Junpei is sad that Tsukasa is leaving- he'd rather not have her go but their separation was inevitable from the start. Before going, Tsukasa tells Junpei not to keep her waiting any more because she has waited all this time. She does not mention any names but the implication is clear. As she leaves Junpei, Tsukasa does not turn around. He eventually finds his way back to his highschool's rooftop. The sun was a now setting, lighting up the clouds in a brilliant explosion of red and orange hues.

"That's right," he muses, "it all started on a day like this."

He thinks about everything that happened to him since that fateful day when a beautiful girl with strawberry panties dropped in on him unexpectedly. Suddenly, Junpei is startled to be embraced from behind. For a few moments nothing is said. Junpei becomes aware of the person's heartbeat against his back. Then, he hears a soft, familiar voice.

"Junpei, I. . . ".

He hears her voice break and feels his heart breaking along with it. His thoughts turn to Tsukasa's final words to him. He feels the person behind him start to pull back but before she can, he reaches out and catches her. Startled, she tries to stammer an excuse as she starts to look away. Junpei gently cups her face and turns her to face him. He looks down and sees tears start to well up in her eyes. To his amazement, Junpei wonders why does he feel so. . . . alive?

"Why are you trembling, Aya?" Junpei asks in a soft, whispering voice. He wonders whether Aya can feel his own heart racing wildy.

Aya tries to get herself under control. Her heart was beating so hard that she felt she was going to faint from the rush of blood. She HAS to tell him, she thinks to herself, as she struggles to finally say the words that have been in her heart since middleschool. Stammering, she pressed on.

"Junpei, I- I know this is a difficult time for you but I have to tell you something. I- I've always. . . ."

But before she could finish, Junpei gently lays a finger on her lips. He finally understood. All these years, and now he finally understood. Without thinking about it, the words found Junpei.

"I know," he said gently.

Junpei didn't know when he started crying but Aya was suddenly wiping tears from his face. Such warm hands, Junpei thought, really make me feel cared for. It was probably due to their mutual tear-wiping that they found themselves sharing their first real kiss. Neither Junpei nor Aya knew how long it lasted but both wished they could bottle that feeling forever.

Looking at Aya in his arms, she was smiling and crying at the same time. Junpei had never seen her look as beautiful as she did now. Nuzzling her forehead and before being lost in an embrace, Junpei finally managed to tell Aya what she had been waiting to hear from him for all these years.

"I know, Aya. I love you too."

FIN

p.s.
I would like to hear your opinion about it so pls. comment..




Feels like I want to cry....*sniff*
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Posted 11/25/08

death_sythe08 wrote:


Tsukasa leaves for France and says goodbye to Junpei. Junpei is sad that Tsukasa is leaving- he'd rather not have her go but their separation was inevitable from the start. Before going, Tsukasa tells Junpei not to keep her waiting any more because she has waited all this time. She does not mention any names but the implication is clear. As she leaves Junpei, Tsukasa does not turn around. He eventually finds his way back to his highschool's rooftop. The sun was a now setting, lighting up the clouds in a brilliant explosion of red and orange hues.

"That's right," he muses, "it all started on a day like this."

He thinks about everything that happened to him since that fateful day when a beautiful girl with strawberry panties dropped in on him unexpectedly. Suddenly, Junpei is startled to be embraced from behind. For a few moments nothing is said. Junpei becomes aware of the person's heartbeat against his back. Then, he hears a soft, familiar voice.

"Junpei, I. . . ".

He hears her voice break and feels his heart breaking along with it. His thoughts turn to Tsukasa's final words to him. He feels the person behind him start to pull back but before she can, he reaches out and catches her. Startled, she tries to stammer an excuse as she starts to look away. Junpei gently cups her face and turns her to face him. He looks down and sees tears start to well up in her eyes. To his amazement, Junpei wonders why does he feel so. . . . alive?

"Why are you trembling, Aya?" Junpei asks in a soft, whispering voice. He wonders whether Aya can feel his own heart racing wildy.

Aya tries to get herself under control. Her heart was beating so hard that she felt she was going to faint from the rush of blood. She HAS to tell him, she thinks to herself, as she struggles to finally say the words that have been in her heart since middleschool. Stammering, she pressed on.

"Junpei, I- I know this is a difficult time for you but I have to tell you something. I- I've always. . . ."

But before she could finish, Junpei gently lays a finger on her lips. He finally understood. All these years, and now he finally understood. Without thinking about it, the words found Junpei.

"I know," he said gently.

Junpei didn't know when he started crying but Aya was suddenly wiping tears from his face. Such warm hands, Junpei thought, really make me feel cared for. It was probably due to their mutual tear-wiping that they found themselves sharing their first real kiss. Neither Junpei nor Aya knew how long it lasted but both wished they could bottle that feeling forever.

Looking at Aya in his arms, she was smiling and crying at the same time. Junpei had never seen her look as beautiful as she did now. Nuzzling her forehead and before being lost in an embrace, Junpei finally managed to tell Aya what she had been waiting to hear from him for all these years.

"I know, Aya. I love you too."

FIN

p.s.
I would like to hear your opinion about it so pls. comment..





Aya should be with Manaka, not Tsukasa. What a beautiful ending...

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nnice luvd it
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i really live it, umm but dunno when i think aobut ichigo100% i get this sadness feeling :'(

ichigo 100% will be always in my memories.

p.s: i love nishino & aya both but i rather Aya.
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why don't u send ur fanfic to the author? maybe she would make it into manga? its for all the fans outside japan! since now it has been released in US by VIZ

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this is her fanmail address...i found it from a fansite http://mkmm.sakura.ne.jp/ (its in japanese)
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of course I WILL!!
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