Umi Yumi manga
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Umi Yumi distription
This story involves two girls named Umi and Yumi. Ever since they were little, they were friends, and their lives were filled with happiness and joy until Yumi's parents died in a fire. Umi told Yumi that she can stay at her house. Yumi had a star mark on her face and she doesn't know what it is for. However Umi has the same mark as Yumi does.

It turns out that Yumi met a boy named Kaito and they fell deeply in love at first sight, but they don't know that the other one likes them. Now we come to Yuki who is extremely popular with both the guys and the girls at her school, however she has a bratty attitude. She also likes Kaito. She founds out that Kaito likes Yumi so she plans on doing dirty tricks on her so she can get closer to Kaito.There is also a boy that is yuki's Older brother he which is a magic user and a rival of kaito.What will this manga be??

Umi Yumi story
There was once a 13 year old girl named Yumi. When she was little her parents died during a fire. Umi saw Yumi crying and she said "Whats wrong?" Yumi said that her parents are gone and she's all alone now. Umi was surprised. (Note: The rest of this doesn't make sense with the top half so I'll just change it around) Umi invited her to stay at her house. Yumi wondered if it was alright and Umi nodded. Their journey began, a guy, a girl, a friend and a rival. Who knows what will happen, keep reading to find out.

The author: Luna-chan
©2007 Luna-chan Works

About the author
The author which is me
um...Please dont copy this manga im trying to be a manger writer
I love anime and i really want to entirtian every body
Im bad at spelling tehe
Please try to correct me O.O


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.♥☺♡ ღ nice romantic manga... hope to see part 2 soon .♥☺♡ ღ

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tehe im just preveiwing it right now
Im going to make chapter one very soon
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Eh, the beginning of the story is sorta unbelievable. Its just that you wouldn't ask some random person if she wanted to stay at your house. Maybe you should make them child-hood friends or something and they met again due to fate. You also have several spelling mistakes in there as well. Other than that, it looks alright. Just remember, Manga comes with pictures.
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ya but im not going to draw pictures yet
realy?
im bad at spelling
please tell me what it is and i'll correct it
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Eh I'll just edit your post lol.

Umi Yumi Description

This story involves two girls named Umi and Yumi. Ever since they were little, they were friends, and their lives were filled with happiness and joy until Yumi's parents died in a fire. Umi told Yumi that she can stay at her house. Yumi had a star mark on her face and she doesn't know what it is for. However Umi has the same mark as Yumi does.

It turns out that Yumi met a boy named Kaito and they fell deeply in love at first sight, but they don't know that the other one likes them. Now we come to Yuki who is extremely popular with both the guys and the girls at her school, however she has a bratty attitude. She also likes Kaito. She founds out that Kaito likes Yumi so she plans on doing dirty tricks on her so she can get closer to Kaito. What will this manga be??

Umi Yumi story
There was once a 13 year old girl named Yumi. When she was little her parents died during a fire. Umi saw Yumi crying and she said "Whats wrong?" Yumi said that her parents are gone and she's all alone now. Umi was surprised. (Note: The rest of this doesn't make sense with the top half so I'll just change it around) Umi invited her to stay at her house. Yumi wondered if it was alright and Umi nodded. Their journey began, a guy, a girl, a friend and a rival. Who knows what will happen, keep reading to find out.

Author: Luna-chan
Edited by: Suicider

©2007 Luna-chan Works (You can think of a better name later.

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I don't see the picture... So... D:
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