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post any poems about love or despair or both here. heres my very first poem. please send me any comments bout it through pms. hope u like it^^

Valentines Day is finally here
People jump, scream, and cheer
And though this day is supposed to be about love
That's not what i see

I see aching hearts
Shattered souls and broken bonds
And no on seems to be there to share their feelings
No one cares
But even they dream of a better day

Another day to redo what has been done
Another day to frolic in the birght yellow sun
One more day of happiness with their love
But sadly no more shall these days come

Though the world is filled with despair
These will always be someone there
To comfort, to hold, to yell you "its okay"
Here on this Valentines Day
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Posted 2/14/08
as said before. very nice
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Very nice... speaking the truth.. but now I feel bad.. a day after vday I broke up with my bf... lol but he deserved it so dont worry.. I am not a bad person
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this ones a rough draft. hope u like it^^

The Final Straw

As Tina sits at her desk
Waiting for him to call
He's out with his friends
Having a ball

Time flies on
As the clock ticks
And inside her mind
She thinks she has been tricked

"That's it! I've had it!"
"This is the final straw!"
"I'm gonna rip what brains he has
right through his skull!"

So she got on her bike
And pedaled down Chastian Lane
She was going so fast
She almost ripped her bicycle chain

Meanwhile at the party
Sean wasn't having much fun
All he did was stare
At the setting sun

He felt guilty for leaving Tina
Crying alone in the dark
And ditching her to hang out
With his friends Kyle and Mark

So he jumped down from the balcony
And ran to get his bike
But out of the shadows came
Tina's ex-boyfriend Mike

Mike started beating up Sean
for you see he was high
He had some space ckae
But thought it was pie

He kept hammering at him
He even broke his nose
"This one is for making Tina
do all of your chores!"

Just then Tina rode up on her bike
Took out her dad's pistol
And shot Mike
In the back

As she helping him stand up
She slapped his face
"I can't believe you would even come
here in the first place!"

As the sun finally set
Sean looked in her eyes
"Thank you for saving me.
I can't believe he thought the space cake was pie!"

With the sun gone
They had their first kiss
But her dad saw everything from the car
And was really pissed

In time he accepted him
But made him promise one thing
To never, ever
Hurt his daughter again
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Posted 2/19/08
aww i love it.. its really good..
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Posted 2/19/08 , edited 4/25/08

prettyhebe wrote:


X02fighter wrote:

this ones a rough draft. hope u like it^^

The Final Straw

As Tina sits at her desk
Waiting for him to call
He's out with his friends
Having a ball

Time flies on
As the clock ticks
And inside her mind
She thinks she has been tricked

"That's it! I've had it!"
"This is the final straw!"
"I'm gonna rip what brains he has
right through his skull!"

So she got on her bike
And pedaled down Chastian Lane
She was going so fast
She almost ripped her bicycle chain

Meanwhile at the party
Sean wasn't having much fun
All he did was stare
At the setting sun

He felt guilty for leaving Tina
Crying alone in the dark
And ditching her to hang out
With his friends Kyle and Mark

So he jumped down from the balcony
And ran to get his bike
But out of the shadows came
Tina's ex-boyfriend Mike

Mike started beating up Sean
for you see he was high
He had some space ckae
But thought it was pie

He kept hammering at him
He even broke his nose
"This one is for making Tina
do all of your chores!"

Just then Tina rode up on her bike
Took out her dad's pistol
And shot Mike
In the back

As she helping him stand up
She slapped his face
"I can't believe you would even come
here in the first place!"

As the sun finally set
Sean looked in her eyes
"Thank you for saving me.
I can't believe he thought the space cake was pie!"

With the sun gone
They had their first kiss
But her dad saw everything from the car
And was really pissed

In time he accepted him
But made him promise one thing
To never, ever
Hurt his daughter again



Awwwwwwwwww It so sweet^^But I hate Mike in this poem^^And tina and Sean Are sooo cute together^^Great Job^^



thanx^^
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Posted 2/23/08 , edited 4/25/08
(The Imprisiond)

The imprisoned,
Is what you’ve made,
Me become.

By holding me here,
I’ll never be the same,
Saying,
Sweet things to try,
And win me over,
I’ll never come,

I don’t love you,
Never will,
I’m stuck in this cage,
With nothing to do,
But mope for the one,
You killed.

Don’t you see it?
I’m not yours to keep imprisoned,
I’m here against my will,
Chained to the wall.

Let me go,
I’ll die here,
I’ll die anyway,
You’ve killed him,
My heart is already pulled out,
And strung against the wall,
What more do you want?


I’m imprisoned in your will,
The steel is holding me back,
Or you’d be dead already.

You’re haunting me,
With my past,
Its torture,
Remerging his last words,
Of hate, to you.
I’m stuck in your,
Imaginary world,
Where I’m just,
A toy,
To be thrown around.

It’s not meant to be,
Sorry, I really am,
That he hasn’t killed you,
Already,
He died saving me.

Imprisoned, imprisoned,
To the concreted wall,
The chains holding me back,
It’s always going to be pieces,

Let me go,
I’ll die here,
I’ll die anyway,
You’ve killed him,
My heart is already pulled out,
And strung against the wall,
Just kill me now.

I still don’t understand,
How you smile,
Knowing that I’m in pain,
But of course,
You have everything,
You’ve ever wanted,
Including me.

I’m chained to the wall,
With my heart ripped out,
And pined to the wall,
It’s over,
One day I’ll break the chains,
And you will find me,
Dead on the floor.

I’m already gone,
Gone with him,
All you see,
Chained to the wall,
Is my body, mined, and heart,
My soul is gone,
Gone with him.

We’re happy,
We always were,
We’re together,
You can’t prevent that!

Its over it really is,
I’m going to die,
The pain of you is worse,
Than dieing.

Let me go,
I’ll die here,
I’ll die anyway,
You’ve killed him,
My heart is already pulled out,
And strung against the wall,
You can’t keep us apart.
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Posted 2/25/08 , edited 4/25/08
I made it on request. Hope u enjoy^^

Fake courage

She came home one day
After a tough day at school
And she was her loved one
Sitting by the pool

Hi honey! How was your day?
Sadly he looked up and said “I’m going to war”
She gasped “Why? When do you leave?”
He gets up “Right after I get back from the store”

She held him back “No! You can’t leave!
I won’t let you!
Your unit is one of the best in the army!
Just tell General Davis you have the flu!”

He grabbed her hand
And looked into her eyes
“Now you and I both know
I can’t tell the General lies.”

And with a tender kiss
He said “I promise not to
get shot in the head.”
“Even with jokes like that you still make me smile.”

Then he left
Her and house all alone
When she knew he was gone
She started to moan
A few weeks passed
When she got a phone call
From the General while he was at a ball
“Yes?”

“Ann, I’m sorry to say,
“No, please don’t tell me he’s…
“dead. He was blown sky high while raiding a cache
Ann started sobbing.
Posted 2/26/08 , edited 4/25/08
i love the poems^^
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Heres a sonnet that i made for my gf at school. its my first sonnet

From the break of day
To the end of night
I'll always be there for you, Ms.May
And make sure everythings all right

You are the only star in my nighttime sky
Nay, more like a mesmerizing celestial light
That no man can reach so they just cry
For you are too brigth

Without you I don't know what I'll do
I'll swim any ocean, face any foe
As long as I'm with you
Just please don't make my heart woe

Now, Ms. May, I will end with this
Soon we will have our first kiss
Posted 3/1/08 , edited 4/25/08
oh wow!!!!!!!! i luv all of ur poems. :)
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oh wow!!!!!!!! i luv all of ur poems. :)


thanx^^
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Posted 3/2/08 , edited 4/25/08
very nice and congrats
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Heres another poem named Regret

I regret what I've done
I regret what I've said
Now deep in my soul
I feel as if I'm dead

I'm sorry
For everything I've done
For making you beat
The sad, lonely drum

For ruining your life
I'm sorry for that too
Right now I feel
Like such a fool

Now I lost my voice
And my eyes show despair
My heart is broken
And will never be repaired
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Heres one more called Final Words

His final words
Before they said goodbye
His final words
As they were watching the nighttime sky

His final words
Buzzed around her head
His final words
Made their feelings for each other dead

His final words
Made her cry that night
His final words
While they were having the fight

HIs final words
Were a horrible thing to say
His final words
Made her not see the light of next day
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