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Posted 3/7/08 , edited 4/25/08
Forgive Me

Though it may seem
Like we are drifting away
Let me tell you something
"Everything will be okay"

We will laugh and kiss
Spend everyday together
Have lots of fun
No matter what weather

The mistake I made
Will haunt us forever, that's true
But I promise I will not do it again
Even when I'm not with you

Forgive me, my angel
My light that brightens my dark day
Now you know that
Everything will be okay
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The Break-up

Weeks have passed
Since it begun
When him and her
Became one

But on this
Twisted, somber day
Neither of them
Want to say

That yesterday
They had a fight
That she is no longer
His shining light

They broke-up
Without saying goodbye
Now both, sit lonely
Watching the nighttime sky

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Aftermath

As they stare
At the nighttime sky
They saw their memories of each other
Wizzing by

The time they went skating
The time in the park
One memory both stopped at
Was their first kiss after dark

She started sobbing
He just sighed
They both said
"Why didn't we say goodbye?"

"Its hard to break up
A relationship like this
They looked at their rings
And gave them a kiss

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Hope?

When days are somber
When things go wrong
When day turns to night
When your best friend is gone

Hope comes into play
Bringing happiness, love, and joy
when a premature baby survives
Being it girl or boy

But sadly hope
Is not always there
To make things better
To drive out despair

Sometimes its cousin
Plays a trick on you, its true
That it'll stay and eat at you
Until you feel blue
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your a really great writer your very creative to!!great job!!

personally my fav was aftermath awesome
Posted 3/7/08 , edited 4/25/08
u kno what big bro. u will become a famous poet on 1 day. believe me.
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thanx u guys and girls
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You are..........

You are like a peral
Lucky to find one
Among hundreds of clams
But looking for you is half the fun

You are like a elixer
Able to cure
My harshest illnesses
For none are as pure

You are my sunshine,
My angel, My star
I'll always be there for you
No matter where you are

Words like breathtaking, extravegant, and flawless
Could only begin to describe you
Wonderous, divine, and splendid
Are great words too

But it seems that even these words
Don't seem to say
Just how much I love you
Every single day
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Healed Wounds

Some wounds are deep
Others are small
But love leaves
The greatest wound of all

It leaves you in the dark
It leaves you with pain
It makes you never want
To love again

You sit alone at lunch
Everyday at school
You remember your days with him
But now you call yourself a fool

'Til a stranger
Sits down beside you
"I know what you have been though"
"2 years ago, my girlfriend broke up with me too"

He says "Don't ever think
your the only one
who has to play
the sad, lonely drum"

As he hugged her
He saw in her eyes
In addition to tears
He saw the sad part of her die

In place formed something new
As she started to mope
In her dark, brown eyes
He saw hope
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Posted 3/14/08 , edited 4/25/08
ooo my gosh i love it... i wrote 14 new poems
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This one is kind of of my topic but its still pretty funny

Sweet Revenge

After many times
Of being stood up
She finally said
"Okay, that's enough!"

While walking home
She thought of a plan
To get back at
Her ex-boyfriend, Dan

She walked by his house
And saw his truck
He loves it so much
He named ti Buck (werido)

She slashed his tires
She smashed his hood
She broke his windows
Did just about anything she could

She said "Oh sweet revenge,
make sure he pays
for what he did to me
for the rest of his days"
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Abuse



Everyday she begins anew
With brusies and cuts
From both her boyfriend
And his mutts

She puts make-up on
To hide what he did
She loves him too much
Even though he said

"Get out off my life,
you f****** b****!"
Then he picked her up
And threw her in a ditch

Though those words hurt
She didn't care
Cause he always seems
To be there

The very next day
He makes her wait
So he can come to say
"I'm sorry"
Posted 3/23/08 , edited 4/25/08
Um..well..this is my first poem posting. & I dont rhyme in my poems. So..well..hope you like it

Life of a Heartbreaker
Why is it that...
When your the one who broke the heart,
You leave him heartbroken?
Everybody feels sorry
For the boy you left...
Why not for you?
You have to watch
The person drown in tears
While you watch, silently in pain.
I still dont understand
Why people take sides
After their friends break up.
Why cant we all just get along?
Friends are so cruel sometimes
Telling you that you were wrong
Telling you you’re horrible.
But they have no idea
How much hurt
I’m also going through.
So just letting all of you know
I cry every night
Because I know I hurt that boy
Because I left him when he needed me
Because I still love him.
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Posted 3/24/08 , edited 4/25/08


Jst wanted to say that i Loved this Poem, realy great!!..Touchy..keep it Up=D

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Heres another poem named Regret

I regret what I've done
I regret what I've said
Now deep in my soul
I feel as if I'm dead

I'm sorry
For everything I've done
For making you beat
The sad, lonely drum

For ruining your life
I'm sorry for that too
Right now I feel
Like such a fool

Now I lost my voice
And my eyes show despair
My heart is broken
And will never be repaired


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Posted 3/29/08 , edited 4/25/08

snowXmirage wrote:



Jst wanted to say that i Loved this Poem, realy great!!..Touchy..keep it Up=D

X02fighter wrote:

Heres another poem named Regret

I regret what I've done
I regret what I've said
Now deep in my soul
I feel as if I'm dead

I'm sorry
For everything I've done
For making you beat
The sad, lonely drum

For ruining your life
I'm sorry for that too
Right now I feel
Like such a fool

Now I lost my voice
And my eyes show despair
My heart is broken
And will never be repaired




thanx so much^^ i look forward to read some of urs
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