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Posted 3/29/08 , edited 4/25/08
i wrote this poem for both myself and for a friend. i hope u like it.

Fool's Game
Love is but a fool's game
And we are the pawns
It robs our happiness
And leaves us crying until dawn

Drowning our misery and sorrows
With lies and other things
Wounds our hearts and watches
As it falls apart at the seams

Makes us cry late at night
Over some stupid boy
Shouldn't love bring us
Not sadness but only joy?

Love is a fool's game
So why should we play?
If when we lose we might
Not see the light of next day
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Posted 3/31/08 , edited 4/25/08
One Fatal Summer

After many failed attempts to find love
She knew she reached her end
With a knife grasped in her hand
She silienced herself and fell on her bed

It started with three simple words
That her crush said
She became completely speechless
As those words buzzed about in her head

Many months went by before he said
"I have to go away. My dad is sending me to summer school"
"It's okay. I'll wait for you."
"In that case, meet me in three months by my swimming pool"

3 months had passed as long as they were
She waited hours, but he never showed
Walking home she started to cry
For she became dead inside and had lost all hope
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Posted 3/31/08 , edited 4/25/08
wow i loved and it seemed like a poem in my note book. (but i digress) a poem like this really makes you wonder about the insparation . ? . ? but all in all good job.
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Posted 4/1/08 , edited 4/25/08

Takumoto wrote:

wow i loved and it seemed like a poem in my note book. (but i digress) a poem like this really makes you wonder about the insparation . ? . ? but all in all good job.


thanx tak and i guess my inspiration is all of u guys. the poems i write come from all of ur lives and relationships. I rarely write about myself
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Posted 4/2/08 , edited 4/25/08
Wow everyone is so good! Mine kinda sucks compared to everyone else's.
Here it is...

Reaching out from the light
Holding onto these tears tight
Watching you from far
I am right here
Can you hear my heart beat faster
Everytime I get a glimpse of you
This butterfly inside tried calling your name
Hoping you would come running
Ask me only once to come
I'll come out
From this daze
To lend you a hand
Please don't abandon me
I kept you inside my heart
I dreamt of you chasing after me
No matter how close or far away
In reality you wouldn't even take
One step closer towards me
Why are you so scared?
I'll always be waiting
For the day you decide to chase after me
And realize that you are the one meant for me
I'm right here
Right here reaching out
Looking inside this lonely heart
Wondering if your ever going to appear
I know you are never going to come
And reappear into my life
Whenever I call out for you
There's always dead silence in the air
Even though I will never see you again
I will always keep you inside my heart Please aappear again to me and say "Everyting will be alright"
Just please come back and stay by my side
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Posted 4/2/08 , edited 4/25/08

raymay wrote:

Wow everyone is so good! Mine kinda sucks compared to everyone else's.
Here it is...

Reaching out from the light
Holding onto these tears tight
Watching you from far
I am right here
Can you hear my heart beat faster
Everytime I get a glimpse of you
This butterfly inside tried calling your name
Hoping you would come running
Ask me only once to come
I'll come out
From this daze
To lend you a hand
Please don't abandon me
I kept you inside my heart
I dreamt of you chasing after me
No matter how close or far away
In reality you wouldn't even take
One step closer towards me
Why are you so scared?
I'll always be waiting
For the day you decide to chase after me
And realize that you are the one meant for me
I'm right here
Right here reaching out
Looking inside this lonely heart
Wondering if your ever going to appear
I know you are never going to come
And reappear into my life
Whenever I call out for you
There's always dead silence in the air
Even though I will never see you again
I will always keep you inside my heart Please aappear again to me and say "Everyting will be alright"
Just please come back and stay by my side


I beg to differ. its really good^^ a little practice goes a long way. I only have 2 rules. one, never doubt urself or ur work. 2, write from ur heart, not ur brain
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Posted 4/7/08 , edited 4/25/08
Let me write a dark poem...

From my shackles of eternal undeath
I come to wreak havoc to the souls of the living
My heart reigns of utter darkness
And from its light will pour sorrow
why I speak in words of lone?
I wish for others to see my own true darkness

And in my mind I will be poisoned like a traitorous spouse
In my own words let me show you the path to light
By embracing the darkness in our hearts
Remember in every heart lies utter bitterness and sin
embrace it and you control your fate

But does any of you wish to judge me?
Just because I wield darkness?
So be it but a question remains
Did I ever use it to end lives and cause chaos?
So I await you're reply...
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Posted 4/20/08 , edited 4/25/08
Unsure

She brings me happiness
She's my sunshine after the rain
I love her so much
She's the cure for all my pain

But when we say goodnight
Just before I start to pray
I think, "Does she really love me?"
This stupid feeling just won't go away

I lay in my bed
Thinking and pondering why
"Should we stay together?"
"Should we part ways and say goodbye?"

I'm unsure of what she feels
And hopefully in due time
This feeling will disappear
And we won't have to say goodbye
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Posted 4/20/08 , edited 4/25/08
It was perfect, i loved it, ur awesome.
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It was perfect, i loved it, ur awesome.


thanks tak. that means a lot
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Posted 4/23/08 , edited 4/25/08

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Unsure

She brings me happiness
She's my sunshine after the rain
I love her so much
She's the cure for all my pain

But when we say goodnight
Just before I start to pray
I think, "Does she really love me?"
This stupid feeling just won't go away

I lay in my bed
Thinking and pondering why
"Should we stay together?"
"Should we part ways and say goodbye?"

I'm unsure of what she feels
And hopefully in due time
This feeling will disappear
And we won't have to say goodbye



Nice poem, I'm seeing that rhyme scheme pattern your making Interesting use of words with a nice stanza body
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Posted 4/23/08 , edited 4/25/08

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X02fighter wrote:

Unsure

She brings me happiness
She's my sunshine after the rain
I love her so much
She's the cure for all my pain

But when we say goodnight
Just before I start to pray
I think, "Does she really love me?"
This stupid feeling just won't go away

I lay in my bed
Thinking and pondering why
"Should we stay together?"
"Should we part ways and say goodbye?"

I'm unsure of what she feels
And hopefully in due time
This feeling will disappear
And we won't have to say goodbye



Nice poem, I'm seeing that rhyme scheme pattern your making Interesting use of words with a nice stanza body


thanx^^
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Posted 5/7/08
hey everbody im kinda on a block with the names to my poems...so feel free to give any suggestions


Everday i wonder
"does he see me does
he think about me"

They way he looks
the way he acts
I just cant stand it
I get all mushy inside

Until one day i see him
at a friends party
he walks towards me
my heart drps my hands sweaty

What should i do say hi
or just let him walk by
should i say "great party huh"

While i wonder he walks by
then he whispers in my ear
Youre cute when youre nervous
and keeps on waking by

tell me wat u think
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Posted 8/4/08 , edited 8/6/08
B brutal with this one. i wanna improve >.<

The Girl Next Door
Everyday it's the same old story
Wondering what she will do next
Sitting and crying in her room
Staring at that forsaken text

Days go by and all I see
Is sorrow, lament, and lies
I can't help, but feel sorry
When I see her heavy, brown eyes

Despite what she has been through
I don't just see tears
I see her laugh and smile
Knowing that someone really cares
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