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Title: Mission

Plot: In the year 2120, scientists discovered a meteor is heading towards the planet of Amnestria. When the meteor lands on the planet, something far worse happened to the planet. The meteor cracked open releasing a gas that rapidly spread across the planet. Because of this abnormal gas, vegetation has suddenly rose to apocalyptic level. The plants begin to eat people or people turned into mutant plant monster that devour humans. Humanity became extinct due to the plant life taking over the world. But out of this came five groups of ten people who have superpowers. These people are cryogenically frozen and placed in a safe location. Three years later they have awaken and are released into the world. They have a mission which is to destroy the planet life and repopulate the planet.


What do you think? What can use some work? Tell me your thoughts.
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qualeshia3 wrote:

Title: Mission

Plot: In the year 2120, scientists discovered a meteor is heading towards the planet of Amnestria. When the meteor lands on the planet, something far worse happened to the planet. The meteor cracked open releasing a gas that rapidly spread across the planet. Because of this abnormal gas, vegetation has suddenly rose to apocalyptic level. The plants begin to eat people or people turned into mutant plant monster that devour humans. Humanity became extinct due to the plant life taking over the world. But out of this came five groups of ten people who have superpowers. These people are cryogenically frozen and placed in a safe location. Three years later they have awaken and are released into the world. They have a mission which is to destroy the planet life and repopulate the planet.


What do you think? What can use some work? Tell me your thoughts.



Could be interesting. Why cryogenically frozen, though? If they were in a stored safe place, wouldn't they not need to be preserved? If it was to hide, then a hidden shelter is all that is necessary. Or a different idea. Humanity moved off-planet to an orbital outpost, but due to another impending meteor shower (or whatever) the habitat will not remain viable. The humans must prepare to spearhead one last colonization effort, from orbit, or face extinction.
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Posted 2/15/17

toquenotbeanie wrote:


qualeshia3 wrote:

Title: Mission

Plot: In the year 2120, scientists discovered a meteor is heading towards the planet of Amnestria. When the meteor lands on the planet, something far worse happened to the planet. The meteor cracked open releasing a gas that rapidly spread across the planet. Because of this abnormal gas, vegetation has suddenly rose to apocalyptic level. The plants begin to eat people or people turned into mutant plant monster that devour humans. Humanity became extinct due to the plant life taking over the world. But out of this came five groups of ten people who have superpowers. These people are cryogenically frozen and placed in a safe location. Three years later they have awaken and are released into the world. They have a mission which is to destroy the planet life and repopulate the planet.


What do you think? What can use some work? Tell me your thoughts.



Could be interesting. Why cryogenically frozen, though? If they were in a stored safe place, wouldn't they not need to be preserved? If it was to hide, then a hidden shelter is all that is necessary. Or a different idea. Humanity moved off-planet to an orbital outpost, but due to another impending meteor shower (or whatever) the habitat will not remain viable. The humans must prepare to spearhead one last colonization effort, from orbit, or face extinction.


I still need to make changes to the plot.
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Hey can I bounce an idea off you?

Title: The setting sun

Japan 1945: Hirohito is about to sign the Potsdam Treaty, effectively ending WWII. This is an alternate timeline where Takeshi Mori actually succeeds in his coup to effectively place the emperor under house arrest, thus stopping the treaty from happening and keeping Japan in the war. The allies are forced to land, with the USSR taking Hokaido, and the US making a bloody assault on Honshu. Japan collapses, and becomes an emperor-less puppet state, divided between the cold war powers. The story is told from the perspectives of Corporal Paine, a marine who was involved in the US landing, who sees many of his fellow soldiers die, Ayase Tamaki, a small child, separated from her mother and witness to many tragedies, Mishio Tamaki, Ayase's mother, who is in a Soviet work camp in Hokaido, and Yuri Drubestkaya, a Russian private, who falls in love with Mishio, and agrees to help her escape, after finding that she is with his child. Both Corporal Paine and Yuri play a part in reuniting the remnants of the Tamaki family, to find hope the bleak, harsh surroundings of a divided postwar Japan.
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