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Posted 2/15/08
i can not make this up to you,
i can not make you see,
that all the while this is hurting you,
it's also hurting me..

i can not change the past,
i can be no-one but me,
is that the fact that kills you?
i'm not who i claim to be?

you've seen the fake persona
that i puton day by day,
you haven't seen the real me,
the one i won't let stay..

this is who i really am,
a flirt, a tease, a pain,
can u say you like me now?
you like me just the same?

the question that comes now,
is do you choose to believe,
what i wrote in the last verse?
now what do you choose to perceive?
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Posted 2/15/08
wow!!!...I like u!!! hahahaha!!!!...very good!!!...only i have to read ur another poem!!! Congratulations
Posted 2/16/08
UR REALLY GOOD I LOVE UR POEMS!
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Posted 2/27/08
hhuuuuaaaaahhhhhh *Sob sob*
realllllyyyyy GRRRRREEEEEEAAAAAATTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted 2/29/08
OH my gods, this is really really good ><
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted 3/1/08
omg that was a good poem =[ it was very touching
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