Post Reply I'm writing an anime-based urban fantasy novel! Let me know what you think!
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Posted 4/5/17
Hey all. As the title suggests, I'm currently writing an anime-based urban fantasy novel. I'd really like to know what people think about it, mainly the writing style and the pace. I don't have a whole lot uploaded yet, but I've been updating it pretty regularly lately. If you're interested, please check it out. I"m always open to constructive criticism. I'll link my quotev since it's easier to read and prettier than a forum. And a blurb, too!

https://www.quotev.com/story/9317087/Psychics-Kyosuke-and-the-Mad-Scientist/1

Kyo is your typical less than athletic freshman in high school. At least that's what he thought before he was kidnapped by the world's most absent minded mad scientist and his crew bent on unlocking Kyo's true potential. That is, of course, if he really has any. Kyo soon discovers that there is an unseen evil attempting to obtain unimaginable power, and he’s being enlisted to join the fight. From his sports car loving bodyguard to his body swapping best friend, Kyo will befriend new allies to help him pursue his destiny, as well as unlock the secrets behind his late father’s past. As Kyo battles teleporters, time travelers, and really anti-social telekinetics, he realizes that the answers may have been a lot closer to him all along.


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Posted 4/5/17
Bruh, you need to learn more about how to write urban fantasies XD.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9F-Ycl70vsQ&t=97s
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Posted 4/5/17
I was horribly distraught over your post until I clicked the link, then I thought it was hilarious
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