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Post Reply You are teleported to a fantasy world with no humans. Who do you marry?
Posted 7/26/17 , edited 7/26/17
Catgirls cause i would probably get away with building a personal harem.
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Posted 7/26/17 , edited 7/28/17
No wolf girls? For shame!
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Posted 7/26/17 , edited 7/26/17
Ah once i opened the thread the choices weren't as messed up as my initial thoughts were after reading the thread title.

Think i'd go cat girl. It's not a massive fetish of mine but it is cool and probably the best from that list.
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Posted 7/26/17 , edited 7/26/17

jtjumper wrote:
Yeah, but Monster Musume didn't invent sex or even marriage with fantasy creatures (think mermaid folklore) and my plot setting isn't any fantasy world but its own.


No, but its essentially centered around Exotic Waifus(tm) as a theme. Which is exactly how you presented your plot in the op so you're still in the same cliche.



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But there are two things I want to know: What do you think of the slime background information in the OP and what choice would you choose?


I think slime butt doctor v centaur probably has some rule 34 somewhere. Bu(t) also wonder how exactly a slime could be permanently physically disabled by what I assume is being kicked by a horse.

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Posted 7/26/17 , edited 7/26/17

runec wrote:


No, but its essentially centered around Exotic Waifus(tm) as a theme.

Or husbandos. Basically the nature the question.


Which is exactly how you presented your plot in the op so you're still in the same cliche.

Fair enough.



I think slime butt doctor v centaur probably has some rule 34 somewhere. Bu(t) also wonder how exactly a slime could be permanently physically disabled by what I assume is being kicked by a horse.



No slimes were harmed in the making of this background story. The centaur didn't fare so well. That's why the slime lost his license. But what did think of the backstory for the slimes?
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Posted 7/26/17 , edited 7/26/17
So much thought put into the first post, I'm actually gonna read the whole thing lol
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jtjumper wrote:
No slimes were harmed in the making of this background story. The centaur didn't fare so well. That's why the slime lost his license.


That raises an entirely new set of even more horrifying questions. >.>



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But what did think of the backstory for the slimes?


I think the names are a bit cringeworthy and you've gone into a rather confused place in terms of biology and physics. It sounds like you're leaning towards classic D&D slimes now instead of monster girl slimes. But that renders basically everything you wrote physically impossible. How can they talk/hear/think/etc with no central nervous system or complex organs? How in the world can they selectively digest tissue vs blood? How can they possibly be a liquid made out of a solid, gas or energy?

I mean you seem to be leaning towards them being purely physical creatures instead of A Wizard Did It(tm) creatures so you have a lot of questions to answer if you're really making a go at this writing wise. Otherwise you need to go towards A Wizard Did It(tm) and establish a clear tone for your setting ( is it serious? not serious? fantastical? grounded? completely magical/supernatural or are these races mortal/grounded? )
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Posted 7/26/17 , edited 7/26/17

runec wrote:

But that renders basically everything you wrote physically impossible. How can they talk/hear/think/etc with no central nervous system or complex organs? How in the world can they selectively digest tissue vs blood? How can they possibly be a liquid made out of a solid, gas or energy?

I actually did come up with an explanation for the mechanism that allows this, but I felt including it would make the paragraphs too long and make it boring.
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Posted 7/26/17 , edited 7/27/17
with the creator of the fantasy land
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A lamia will do.
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Catgirl

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You clearly didn't think this through jtjumper

DAMN IT, that's what I get for not reading the thread all the D: *Suffers*


Did you feed that first paragraph into Google like I did?

.............Because I got those images you posted by feeding the first paragraph into Google
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Posted 7/26/17 , edited 7/27/17

jtjumper wrote:
I actually did come up with an explanation for the mechanism that allows this, but I felt including it would make the paragraphs too long and make it boring.


Its already littered with the inexplicable and the unexplained. You make reference to things and locations the reader knows nothing about in a manner that says you expect them to. If you want to keep it concise, trim the references you weren't going to explain anyway and explain things that are more important to formulate a mental image and setting for your monster girls.

If you're seriously going to ask the quest "What do you want to stick your weiner in" you're going to need to provide a bit more of an explanation for those who don't go around randomly sticking their weiners in every day objects. ;p



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Posted 7/26/17 , edited 7/27/17

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Did you feed that first paragraph into Google like I did?

.............Because I got those images you posted by feeding the first paragraph into Google


That's pretty nifty.
Those images are the first thing I think of when I think of merfolk.
But feeding it into google with profit you nothing. It's original content, except for 1/3 (which is also original content that I have posted elsewhere.) Can you find the original location?
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Posted 7/27/17 , edited 7/28/17
Hmmm hard decision, but probably:

Fairy - because, come on it's a fairy xD
Catgirl - Cause they are so damn cute
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