Post Reply Squidwarudo's Final Journey (A Bloodborne Video)
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Posted 8/13/17 , edited 8/13/17
I'm posting this as I sort of want to obtain... feedback or advice on how the video is. There is only really basic editing in this but I'd like to know how it works as a whole. As I'd like to improve even if its just at very basic things.

The video is 4:27 minutes in total if you're curious to see it and give your thoughts. If you could give your thoughts it'd be much appreciated.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PKanyB-sXZc
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Posted 8/14/17 , edited 8/15/17
Music could've been louder than in game sounds.
Having death scenes is funny, but having a bunch in the beginning is kinda off putting.
Showing a fight and having it end abruptly kind of leaves in open ended in how you died, kinda like, I just watched a minute of this fight and I don't get to see the kill?

Just some of the things that stuck out to me in my opinion.
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Posted 8/14/17 , edited 8/15/17

c92butler wrote:

Music could've been louder than in game sounds.
Having death scenes is funny, but having a bunch in the beginning is kinda off putting.
Showing a fight and having it end abruptly kind of leaves in open ended in how you died, kinda like, I just watched a minute of this fight and I don't get to see the kill?

Just some of the things that stuck out to me in my opinion.


I mean its showing the many deaths and attempts is the goal. Then it shows the continuous fight of the successful run. Then when the song reachs a certain part it goes back to deaths in a sort of black and white thing as sort of a flashback intended type of thing. And then I had to cut it in order to fit into the song of him going into second phase. And into the kill. Then Squidwarudo walks into the sun saying his goodbye. But Perhaps I didn't time the death things well aside from the black and white one
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Posted 8/14/17 , edited 8/15/17
Ah, alright. Any chance you'd think about adding text to let the viewer know that it was a flashback? It may just be me, but I thought the deaths were just from a humor stand point.
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c92butler wrote:

Ah, alright. Any chance you'd think about adding text to let the viewer know that it was a flashback? It may just be me, but I thought the deaths were just from a humor stand point.


I mean I don't think that would help the video as it'd do more harm. As when the flashback moment happens (the one with the black and white) it suits the music does it not? However the first few don't really suit it.
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Posted 8/14/17 , edited 8/15/17
I guess I could just be picking at it. Lets see how you improve in the next one.
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Posted 8/14/17 , edited 8/15/17

c92butler wrote:

I guess I could just be picking at it. Lets see how you improve in the next one.


Hm... it might be my own fault so I suppose I'll see what to do with the next one.
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