oh i see well i'm only putting stories cause its for fun ^^ if they don't want to its fine i only made it for people who like making stories and enjoy reading them ^^
i working on it and when i fish it i will tell u but the names are hard to pick each name has to go wich the charecther got any good ones oh and my teacher told me if i finsh it i might be abel to make this a book for the teens to read
i like it, it has nice mix of romance/drama and if you decide to make a long story it can become a great work of art, i would like it to be more detailed though like names of chs and some talking and past events and that stuff
very original it reminds me of my rumbling hearts but a better version, cause in rumbling she gets to live with him i want to know how the romance will develop and i think you should just type it in the forum and edit it when you have
the girl ends up coming to the boys house but she dosen't rmember anything and the boy dosen't know that she the girl from before. so the girl starts to live there and at first the boy dosen't like her but wait it not done yet there is more
here is the sad part , when the girl and her parents come back to see the boy they have an accident and the girls parents die and she looses her memery about everything and it turen out to be that the boy step mother mad the accident
here is the sad part , when the girl and her parents come back to see the boy they have an accident and the girls parents die and she looses her memery about everything and it turen out to be that the boy step mother mad the accident
tal but that would be my storyline other than that you have a good plot i like childhood stories also it would be nice if it even has some step mother being mean to him i would cry if you did that :smile:
i think its sad but to add a little more sadness and dramatic feeling i would like to see the girl return it and says im sorry i cant marry you but then the boy saves her and gets in an accident so then she slowly falls for him in the hospi
he keeped the one wich her name first latter and they promosed to get merried when they grow up ^^ same years past and the boys mom dieas the father marryes to another women more years past and one day the girl comes back from her tuer and
well it lookes like i can't finsh it . okey it about 2 rich little kids when they were little they always played togther and they fell in love when the girl was about 2 live the small boy gived her a neclice wich his name letter on and he k
