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Posted 9/10/17 , edited 9/13/17
There used to be a story here, but meh.
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Posted 9/11/17 , edited 9/11/17
just to let you know, unless you copyrighted that, now anyone can steal it as their own, or if it's published somewhere, otherwise... note it's never wise to place something on the net, plagiarism runs rapid here.

as for the story, as a writer myself, the work is simple and needs work with improvements. I see grammar errors and other minor things, but it's a good start to something much better if you wanted to make it better regarding future development once you've done some research into writing, but I've seen far worse, so good job over all.
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Posted 9/16/17 , edited 9/16/17
Question, How do you copy right your work?
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