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Posted 10/4/17 , edited 10/4/17
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I made a metal song G

G here it is G:

https://youtu.be/khOsr3B53qM

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Posted 10/4/17 , edited 10/4/17

iambetterthanyou wrote:

G

I made a metal song G

G here it is G:

https://youtu.be/khOsr3B53qM

G G G

G G G G G

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You did a good job with this one
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Posted 10/4/17 , edited 10/4/17

Zenpie wrote:


iambetterthanyou wrote:

G

I made a metal song G

G here it is G:

https://youtu.be/khOsr3B53qM

G G G

G G G G G

G


You did a good job with this one


Thanks G
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Not bad. Three things:

1) Cool it with the double bass. Too much...
2) No vocals would be better than just going "EEHHH" every once in a while. If you aren't going to have a heavy vocal focus, try to write songs that are more interesting instrumentally.
3) Work on your transitions.
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Posted 10/4/17 , edited 10/4/17

sundin13 wrote:

Not bad. Three things:

1) Cool it with the double bass. Too much...
2) No vocals would be better than just going "EEHHH" every once in a while. If you aren't going to have a heavy vocal focus, try to write songs that are more interesting instrumentally.
3) Work on your transitions.


thanks for the tips G
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