Post Reply A new poem
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Posted 7/29/08 , edited 7/29/08
Hey there =] I just got back from my trip to France a few days ago. Heres a poem that I wrote awhile back during my trip in a cafe. It still has no title yet but I'll be happy to take on any ideas of naming it.

Frustration, no.
What is this feeling?
This feeling I have been cradling for some time now
I swore to myself that I wasn't in love with you
I swore to myself I wouldn't even look at you
but as I journeyed throughout this majestic place
this place that wafts with gentle breeze carrying the smell of baguettes
I think of no-one but you, often causing me to remember
those smiles that I looked forward to everyday
the joys and conversations we've had with one another
and all those fun memories that lingers in the past
A tear slowly drops from the bowels of my eye
What is this feeling that torments me ever so?
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Posted 7/29/08 , edited 7/29/08
very cool. u amaze me with ur talent.
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