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Posted 9/17/08 , edited 9/17/08
(Ame's POV!)

As I plunged downwards through what seemed to be a slide, I let the past minutes sink in. So I was asking Hiroshi, then suddenly this stupid trap door interrupted me. But... where is this leading to?? What is going on?

Finally, I could see the bottom. It was dark, and smelled weird. Stumbling into a dim-lit cave, I stood shakily, wondering where I am. The cave was wide and spacious. I feel that it was inhabited, some time not long ago, for there was empty cans that stenched the air with its ugly smell.

"Ame?" I heard Hiroshi calling. A thud.
"Hiroshi! I'm down here!" I screamed worriedly, hoping he would somehow hear me.
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Posted 9/18/08 , edited 9/18/08
This is a nice turn of events! Hahaha... Let me try:

(Ame's POV)

"Ame! Stay where you are!" he heard me. That was a very good thing.

Obedient to his words, I stayed put. His footsteps echoed faintly in the empty space as he walked towards where I stood. The silence was intense. The darkness was too solemn. I began to panic. I looked around me, but it was useless in the pitch black hole I've fallen into. The footsteps were getting closer - I could tell by the louder thuds against the rocky surface.

"Hiroshi?" it'd be easier to keep a clear head when I hear his voice.

"I'm coming for you, Ame. Don't worry." his voice was still from afar, contrary to the sound of the footsteps.

"O-okay." I stuttered.

Then, I felt something brush the ankles of my feet. I jumped. That was enough to pull my trigger. I screamed as loudly as I could and ran for it.

"Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!" I yelled again as. . . .whatever it was seemed to be following behind me.

Hopefully, I was running to Hiroshi. But I highly doubted that. . . .
Posted 9/21/08 , edited 9/22/08
((Hiroshi's POV))

"Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh" I suddenly heard the scream of Ame. I cursed under my breath as I already knew that Ame was running, running further and further away from me. I ran faster, my surroundings were pitch black and I couldn't evensee what was right in front of me. This would make finding Ame harder.

"Ame!!" I shouted for her as I kept running. Please, please be alright...Please don't make me be too late. Please......
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Posted 9/23/08 , edited 9/24/08
((Ame's POV))

It wasn't until I slammed into something hard and solid that I realized I might never ever see Hiroshi again. I slide down and curled up against my knee as I sobbed. How did I become do attached to some random guy that I barely knew. how could I have such unusual feeling for him, and why was he even interested in me? I mean I was never the kind of girl guys would fight to give chocolate to .
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Posted 9/26/08 , edited 9/26/08
I'm getting giddy over here! imagination's running wild! >.<

(Ame's POV)

Just when I thought things couldn't get any worse, I was proven wrong. The "wall" I hit. . . well, it wasn't really a wall. I could feel the air tremble as the "wall" or whatever it was started to take action. Apparently, it didn't like to be disturbed in its slumber. I had the unfortunate luck to have been the cause its awakening.

I couldn't even scream anymore. I stood there, rooted on the spot, just staring at it. A faint light from a small opening overhead shined on the creature's features. It wasn't enough for me to recognize what it was in actuality but just enough for me to take note of its hugeness. I felt like fainting.

Hiroshi...please, save me!


Hearing him screaming my name was like a prayer answered. The dead hope revived inside of me at that moment.

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Posted 9/29/08 , edited 9/29/08
Ame's POV (still)

"HIROSHI!" I screamed as loud as I could. Great my voice was back, but the creature was growing bigger....yea not so great. I backed up into a wal,hopefully, and stared at it.
what is taht thing?
I wished it was a big tree taht would raise its roots and help me out of here, but my hopes and dreams was crushed when it growled.
Posted 10/1/08 , edited 10/1/08
(Hiroshi's POV)

The earth trembled beneath my foot upon hearing a low, menacing growl. Concentrating on my hearing senses, I tried to locate the place where the sound came from. As I stepped forward, the sound came again. My ears pricked up and I crouched down lowand put one ear to the ground. The snarl is getting louder. I felt around for some kind of opening that would lead me to the source of the noise..I touched a rough bulk on the even soil, and pressed it down.

Even though I had anticipated a surprise, nothing could have prepared me for this shock. A square patch of ground lowered itself until I reached an underground cavern. I stood up shakily, patting the dirt from my clothes. As soon as I stepped onto the cave floor, the square of land rose up and closed the opening. Trapped.
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Posted 10/7/08 , edited 10/7/08
(cool!!! battle scene!!! ~)

The creature turned out to be very huge. No words can describe its hideous features. Ame can smell its foul breath, and see its frightening eyes full of fury and rage.

"Food...", it growled. It reared its head, and opened its jaws to eat Ame.

Ame shut her eyes and screamed so loud. Is this it?, she thought. Hiroshi...

All of a sudden, the creature roared. Ame opened her eyes, and saw Hiroshi crouching in front of her with a long, rusty spear in his hands. Its tip was buried under the creature's throat.

"Run, Ame!!!", Hiroshi yelled. "I can hold it off!!!"

Obeying Hiroshi, Ame stood up, and ran towards the darkness. The creature tried to swipe at her with its long claws, but Hiroshi stood strong. With all his might, he hurled the creature far away, and followed it.


Ame wanted to run as fast as she could, but she didn't want Hiroshi to be devoured by the creature. She stopped, and looked around. The clashing sounds of metal and claws resonated throughout the dark cave. Ame could even hear the wails and roars of the creature. Without hesitating, she ran and followed the sounds.

(wait!!! matte~~~ I have a lot of ideas to add!!! please wait until I say "Continue"!!! XD ~)
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Posted 10/8/08 , edited 10/8/08
(okay!!! part 2!!! ~)

The cave turned out to be an enormous, ancient armory.

Hiroshi's mind spinned as he brought down the creature wih his powerful thrusts. Instead of blood, fire gushed out of the creature's wounds, partially illuminating the cave. He wondered how a creature with such great intensity got trapped inside the armory.

The creature slashed Hiroshi desperately, but it failed as he disappeared in a flash. Hiroshi reappeared behind the creature's head, poised to strike it with the spear.

"Die in hell!!!", yelled Hiroshi. He brought down the spear with such force that it caused its head to split in two. The creature's final roar shook the whole cave. Hiroshi jumped away as the creature's body went up in flames. He landed a few feet away from the carcass, when all of a sudden, a painful sensation erupted from his right arm.

Hiroshi clasped his arm tightly. No!, he thought. Not now!!!

Too late. The arm turned black. Claws erupted from his fingers, and spikes emerged from the skin.

Hiroshi turned around, and saw Ame standing several feet away from him, horrorstruck.

"N-No...", Ame stammered. "D-Don't tell me y-you're..." She took a step backward.

"Ame, it's not what you think...", Hiroshi tried to explain carefully.

"Then, what are you?!", Ame yelled. Angry bursts of tears flowed down her face. She then ran away.

(aww!!! this is the vital part of the story!!! but I need to leave it for someone who understands Ame!!! remember, Hiroshi's a protagonist!!! ~ please CONTINUE!!!)
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Posted 10/14/08 , edited 10/14/08
What is Hiroshi? What exactly is he?
At first I thought he was some hero of mine, a prince charming riding on a white horse!
Now, he is some kind of ugly creature! What is he?
He was explaining to me...but I have no heart to listen to it.
I want to sit down and burst into tears. I want to scream!
Now, tears really are rolling down my cheeks. Hiroshi just looked at me.

gomen nasai pyrotechnics17! i couldn't really figured out what is Hiroshi...what is he?
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Posted 11/23/08 , edited 11/24/08
There wasn't time to think anymore. Her vision was completely blinded from the falling tears, as Hiroshi turned. More spikes grew from his skin, which was turning more black than anything.
Meanwhile, Ame kept tripping and tripping as she ran as fast as possible, away from..whatever that was.
She cried miserably as she feel again, this time not even bothering to get up.
he was perfect, in every aspect. His voice was golden and silky. His eyes were alluring and breathtaking. Every feature of him she could describe without hesitating.
She shook her head and stubbornly pushed those back, no, no he was a creature, a monster that would eventually eat her. he didn't love her, at least that's what she thinks.
Suddenly her thoughts were interrupted when a loud piercing pained growl echoed violently throughout the cave.
That was when the rocks came tumbling down........
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Posted 11/24/08 , edited 11/24/08
I guess it's time for me to add my ideas... I haven't in a while! Hihihi... I still don't know "what" Hiroshi actually is... so I'll leave it to you guys who have a better imagination than mine!

She opened her mouth as if to scream but no sound came out. She just watched as the rocks tumbled down towards her. She was too weak to stand, let alone save herself from this disaster. She was too tired to run. Every emotion came to her one after another in the short span of twenty-four hours; she was exhausted.

And perhaps. . . . death was far better than the life she had lived. It's not like anybody would care if she perished. The very few people who did were dead themselves. It was time she returned back into their arms.

"Ame! Nooooooo!"

She closed her eyes, then, ignoring the yells of protest. And she succumbed to the darkness of unconsciousness.
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Posted 12/5/08 , edited 12/5/08
(hwaah!!! mee too!!! I haven't written anything for months!!! )
(just a hint about Hiroshi... whoever watched Howl's Moving Castle [Studio Ghibli]... well, I compare Hiroshi to Howl!!! )

Ame could see a bright light in front of her. She slowly raised her arm, and tried to reach for it. However, someone gently held her arm. The sudden warmth that came from the hand made her stop.

"Ame?" a male voice whispered. "Are you alright?"

She recognized Hiroshi's voice, but she couldn't speak. Her throat was dry.

"Can I talk to her for an hour, please?" Hiroshi asked the nurse in charge of Ame.

Ame's vision cleared. She saw the nurse exit the room, and close the door. She looked at Hiroshi, who looked back at her. His soft, caring expression made her think for a while. The mere memory of him transforming into some kind of creature still haunted her.

She tried to speak. "H-Hiro...shi..."


"W-What...happened...t-to you?"

Hiroshi smiled. "Oh, that. Wouldn't it be nice if you rest first before I can explain?"

Ame shook her head. "N-No... I... I know...r-right away..."

"Are you sure? You might not believe me at all. You still think I'm a monster that will eat you when you let your guard down."


"Not a chance. Back there in the cave, you panicked because you didn't know that such creatures exist in this world."

"W-What are you?" Ame carefully asked, regaining a bit of her voice back. Her heart pounded as Hiroshi took a deep breath.

"They call me... a swallow demon..."

(ack!!! I'm out of time!!! I wish I can add more, but I'll be pretty busy for a while!!! Please prolong their conversation!!! ~~~)
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Posted 12/5/08 , edited 12/6/08
(Well, let me continue!!! ~~~)

Ame couldn't believe what she just heard. "A-A swallow demon?"

"Yep," Hiroshi answered. "How else can you explain my speed and strength?"

Ame smiled. "You're...a bird...then."

Hiroshi laughed. His voice was light and a bit musical. "Well, I guess so. I think it's funny."

"Being...a demon?"

Hiroshi's expression never changed. "No. Being compared to a bird."

He sighed. "I was once a human, you know. Like you, with flesh and blood. That all changed when 'they' saw me..."

"Who's 'they'?" Ame asked.

"Entites. Demons. Beings with supernatural powers. I do not know exactly who they are, but I have tried to find them for years. They hold my memories... and my heart."

Hiroshi noticed Ame's fearful expression. "Hey, don't take it literally. Like I said, I will never hurt you. I never meant to."

"But... why me? Why did you save me from my uncle? From my past?"

Hiroshi didn't answer. He just smiled.

"Of all those unfortunate people out there, why me?"

(A little help, anyone??? This is important!!! ~~~)
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Posted 1/1/09 , edited 1/1/09
Okay. Blame the internet for getting broken when I finally decided to post something for this. Blame me for being moody about it and not posting anything at all afterward. And thank me for getting inspired today! -evil laugh-

(Hiroshi's POV)


My brain commanded my legs in a desperate attempt to get away from them. The sight of so much blood terrified me and I had to escape from whoever did that to my family. But my legs would not cooperate. I fell onto my knees. I was weak. Too weak to save my family. To save anyone. To save even myself from my cursed fate. Knowing this, I let the darkness take over my whole body.

"We've got him."


I felt empty - void of any emotion whatsoever. Where am I? I asked myself.

"Finally you're awake, Swallow." I heard someone say in a deep ominous tone.

"Who are you? And what do you want from me?" I demanded, trying to look for the speaker inside the dark room.

"Kieran. We must leave now." the voice came from a thin slit of light to his right. I growled at them. Growled? What did they to to me? I wondered.

"I'll be right there." the first speaker - Kieran - said.

"Wait! You haven't answered my question yet!" I yelled.

And suddenly he was right in front of me. Those red eyes of his told me that he was not human. But what he was, I couldn't put a name to it.

"That will have to wait, Hiroshi." he whispered and I was once again sent to unconsciousness.


"Ahhhhh!" a little girl screamed as she backed onto the wall of a dark alley.

Growls echoed around the enclosed space, scaring the seven-year-old even more. But a greater growl resounded in the vicinity. The girl watched as a dark figure dropped down from the sky. At the sight of him the fierce creatures scurried away in fright.

The young girl approached her savior.

"Birdy. . . ." she mumbled.

I turned to face her, afraid. How ironic. I was the monster but I feared the human child. She didn't look scared. She smiled at me kindly, her bright blue eyes filled with joy. I lowered my head to her height, wanting to see if she was really not frightened. Why didn't she fear me?

"Birdy. . . .thank you." she muttered in her cute voice.

Only she would compare me to a bird. . . .

This is a flashback, take note! -laughs- If you want to continue the flashback. . . .that would be nice! Going back to the present would be nice too!
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